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唱歌的狗尾草
缪立士
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 17:04:54    Post subject: 唱歌的狗尾草 Reply with quote

唱歌的狗尾草

假如我能推开眼前的高楼
像推开一扇窗

假如我能听见鸟鸣
像听见荷叶上跳跃的露珠

假如我能点亮你
像点亮一盏油灯

我将不再孤独
不再迷失

在这座荒凉的城镇
我仍是一棵唱着歌的狗尾草



想像一棵树


比斧头和锯子硬
一声尖叫
就把伐木者击倒

比风沙高
比我低
我一伸手 就能摘到枝条上的星星

白天 它沐浴着阳光
夜里 在我的窗前歌唱
歌声如水 漫过一条又一条街巷
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cyansharp
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 17:18:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

比斧头和锯子硬
一声尖叫
就把伐木者击倒
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真好,学习。
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 17:22:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

浪漫,理想主义的诗歌~很喜欢第二首!
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张凡修
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 17:23:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

哲理.耐品]]
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金金
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 19:20:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好,觉得第一首写硬了一点,想象还可以放一下。
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缪立士
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 20:27:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

张凡修 wrote:
哲理.耐品]]

问好
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 22:31:40    Post subject: 是 Reply with quote

是具有浪漫气质。尤其后一首。
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缪立士
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PostPosted: 2009-03-11 01:02:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
是具有浪漫气质。尤其后一首。
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