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自白

慈林
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Joined: 20 Dec 2008
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Location: 洛杉矶
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Posted: 2009-03-04 22:50:42 Post subject: 自白

自白我不要任何的怜悯和施舍我不要任何的说教和规劝我既赤裸地来到这世上我就赤裸地在世上行走饿了我就啃我的肉渴了我就饮我的血当我啃净了我的肉当我饮光了我的血留给世人是我一具清清白白的骸骨交给上帝是我一个干干净净的灵魂

韩少君
进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
韩少君Collection

Posted: 2009-03-05 01:03:02 Post subject:

虽然直白了一点，还是不错。诗歌是语言的艺术，避免赤裸哲学，注意审美效果。个见，不当见谅。我是读者，仁者见仁，智者见智。食客有权挑剔厨师，但必须尊重他的劳动。谢谢！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

阿依琼裙
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Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Posts: 920
Location: 废墟之上
阿依琼裙Collection

Posted: 2009-03-05 03:54:37 Post subject:

问好! _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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