常建世
童生
Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 96
常建世Collection |
 Posted: 2007-02-25 18:14:36 Post subject: 微型诗6首 |
 |
|
西部
站起是珠穆朗玛
躺下是黄河长江
农民父亲
瞄准城市
把笔直的身躯拉成弓
射出我这枚响箭
年
站起是门上笑着的春联
围拢是一桌温馨的亲情
春联
春季里率先统一亮相的
笑容最丰富最灿烂的花
路
路上发生的事
路什么都知道
路不说
桥
另一种路
不穏固就摇晃 |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
|
|
孙伊斌
童生
Joined: 20 Feb 2007
Posts: 46
Location: 大连
孙伊斌Collection |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
hepingdao
Site Admin
Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 8106
hepingdaoCollection |
| Posted: 2007-02-25 23:22:19 Post subject: |
|
|
《路》
走出
一行历史
《桥》
晃不晃随你
水照样流
_________________
为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
hepingdao
Site Admin
Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 8106
hepingdaoCollection |
| Posted: 2007-02-25 23:31:36 Post subject: |
|
|
《春联》
左东右西
额头写满吉祥
_________________
为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
hepingdao
Site Admin
Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 8106
hepingdaoCollection |
| Posted: 2007-02-25 23:34:46 Post subject: |
|
|
《年》
把四季耍得团团转
输赢只有自知
_________________
为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
hepingdao
Site Admin
Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 8106
hepingdaoCollection |
| Posted: 2007-02-25 23:36:02 Post subject: |
|
|
头两个很有特色呀
_________________
为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
常建世
童生
Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 96
常建世Collection |
| Posted: 2007-02-26 17:33:02 Post subject: |
|
|
| 谢谢评读! |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection |
| Posted: 2007-02-26 20:20:06 Post subject: |
|
|
| 顶一个 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
常建世
童生
Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 96
常建世Collection |
| Posted: 2007-03-01 19:48:16 Post subject: |
|
|
| 谢谢白水 Moonlight提读! |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
|
FAQ
Search
Memberlist
Usergroups
Register
Profile
Log in to check your private messages
Sign in
Album
