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PostPosted: 2009-02-23 17:20:42    Post subject: <和平岛骨笛流韵> Reply with quote

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题记:Nobody说:"愿惨白的骨笛吹彻血红的北美枫林"

Nobody
如果可以,可以剥离
血肉之躯
取一节支撑穹庐的脊椎
我将轻轻地磨制
磨制一只骨笛
流韵,是昨天消逝的日子
袅袅飘逸
远离尘世的灵魂

Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

放放松 Wink
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PostPosted: 2009-02-23 17:51:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

我是彻底放松
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PostPosted: 2009-02-23 17:57:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

你还不行,还得扛着个body, nobody才是彻底放松呢 Very Happy Very Happy


赶紧溜, 那灵魂来了我准输 Wink
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PostPosted: 2009-02-23 19:25:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

Surprised Shocked Very Happy Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-02-23 21:04:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

被你放松到骨肉剥离。。。头找不到脖子,屁股找不到腰 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-02-23 21:09:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
被你放松到骨肉剥离。。。头找不到脖子,屁股找不到腰 Laughing


你不是没人么,没人怕什么? Razz
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PostPosted: 2009-02-24 06:37:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵~俺看回贴乐了~~

那么严肃的诗给周星弛了~~

问好楼上的各位~~
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PostPosted: 2009-02-24 20:22:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好红红. 不好意思, 大家太熟悉, 临屏敲字和Nobody & peace开了个玩笑. 他们喜欢骨笛的笔名, 说很有诗意, Nobody那么一说, 我就势把Nobody给"没人"了, 你没看把月亮乐成那样 Very Happy
用了骨笛的名字,请别介意. Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2009-02-24 23:19:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

我这只骨头做的笛子还在磨砺中,音不太准,朋友们别笑话,多鼓励,多批。先谢。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-25 02:20:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

骨笛 wrote:
我这只骨头做的笛子还在磨砺中,音不太准,朋友们别笑话,多鼓励,多批。先谢。


不好意思, 我们有时喜欢临屏敲点分行文字开开玩笑.这次有点忘乎所以了, 素不相识就拿你的笔名入诗, 见谅Embarassed 其实是善意的, 只是觉得你的诗歌, 淡泊,超脱. 和nobody 的名字有点相似. 你不介意就好.


希望读到你更多的诗歌. 问好.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-25 02:58:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
骨笛 wrote:
我这只骨头做的笛子还在磨砺中,音不太准,朋友们别笑话,多鼓励,多批。先谢。


不好意思, 我们有时喜欢临屏敲点分行文字开开玩笑.这次有点忘乎所以了, 素不相识就拿你的笔名入诗, 见谅Embarassed
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呵呵,怎会介意呢?你们喜欢这个名字我挺高兴的,啥时我的诗也能写得让朋友们喜欢就更高兴了。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-25 07:53:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

远离尘世的灵魂 ——彻底放松。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-25 15:55:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
远离尘世的灵魂 ——彻底放松。


问好福治. 这十分钟临屏草作, 让朋友们见笑了 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2009-02-25 23:43:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

轻灵、、、问好。
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