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游子思乡曲
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PostPosted: 2009-02-23 15:36:12    Post subject: 游子思乡曲 Reply with quote

今天为了找一篇旧文,翻开我的“垃圾筒”看到以前辑录的一组五,七言绝句,重编了一下,贴上供斧正:


游子思乡曲

-秋叶-


五绝-梦醒

梦在枕边行,推窗月正明。
清风传絮语,不尽故乡情。


五绝-故国春秋并试对名句

烟锁池塘柳, 诗铭枫火流,
天涯孤雁远, 故国最春秋。

五绝-春早 (用名赠飘摇)

飘云影绿池,摇柳写春诗。
黄鹂不知倦,争鸣日出时。


五绝-梅(次韵奉和莹雪,逸峰二位)

晚雪潜郊野,村头三两枝。
冒寒仍苦立,寂寂待春迟。


五绝-春, 夏, 秋, 冬

一 春
春山烟雨聚, 归燕舞升平,
万树凝香雪, 遥闻涧水声。

二 夏
夏暮云霞艳, 风低湖水平。
远林归倦鸟, 枕石待涛声。

三 秋
秋水静如镜, 叶燃川野平,
随行遇古渡, 缘是杜鹃声。

四 冬
冬日登高望, 雪原千里平,
长空雁影尽,唯有朔风声。



七绝-雷州半岛

万顷胶林接海疆,玉环南渡佩中央。
康徐沃野连天绿,夏夜茶花十里香。



七绝-雨后雷州

雨尽黄昏翠色浓,蜿然深辙入林中。
火烧天际云霞乱,预是骄阳万里红。



七绝-飞霞山

断瓦残垣荒草稠,飞霞岭上彩霞收。
观音殿后幽泉冷,长伴江波日夜流。



七绝-登岳麓山

岳麓山中爱晚亭,犹闻学子读书声。
枫林淡淡云霞染,古刹晨钟伴鼓鸣。



七绝-望橘子洲头

橘子青青水陆洲,滔滔碧浪拍洲头。
楚天汉地思遐远,汇入湘江向北流。

          

七绝-过飞来峡

浪拍断崖迎晚舟, 飞来古峡水横流。
烟波淼淼归帆远, 两岸青峰到上游。



七绝-秦淮河

六朝金粉满楼船,泣血歌弦不夜天。
灯影摇红随浪去,晓风残月伴吟鹃。



七绝-步韵和语风万里<<夜静思>>

语风吹送带涛声, 万里江天万里晴。
几许故园潜入梦,一枝秋叶动乡情。



七绝-和风来疏竹<<七绝 念友>>

日暮孤云逐水流,异乡漂泊几春秋,
梦回江渚故人在,同沐清风且忘愁。



七绝-新年感怀次韵和颤抖

雪压春花未可妍, 平湖波静起寒烟。
归心已寄秋鸿去, 遥望长天又一年。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-23 16:39:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶兄洋洋洒洒珠落玉盘啊!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-23 17:10:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶飘来思乡曲,恰似天安门地一沙鸥.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-24 08:41:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶,诗衷娓娓,思乡情浓!
唱和一首<浪淘沙>!

... 思 乡 曲 ...
< 浪 淘 沙 >
思 乡 游 子 故 情 浓 ,
春 夏 秋 冬 眺 碧 穹 .
无 尽 牵 魂 萦 入 梦 ,
诗 衷 娓 娓 托 飞 鸿 .
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笛里关山.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-24 20:41:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
秋叶兄洋洋洒洒珠落玉盘啊!

谢谢庆宏兄赏读,这辑诗稿,记录了过去生活的部分路程啊。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-24 20:48:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
秋叶飘来思乡曲,恰似天安门地一沙鸥.


谢谢黄老师,您这归雁应更能体会“天涯孤雁远, 故国最春秋”啊。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-24 20:57:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
秋叶,诗衷娓娓,思乡情浓!
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秋叶,诗衷娓娓,思乡情浓!
唱和一首<浪淘沙>!

... 思 乡 曲 ...
< 浪 淘 沙 >
思 乡 游 子 故 情 浓 ,
春 夏 秋 冬 眺 碧 穹 .
无 尽 牵 魂 萦 入 梦 ,
诗 衷 娓 娓 托 飞 鸿 .

知音者白云兄也,谢谢和作 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-08-24 11:49:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

十年前一首旧作,将秋叶顶出水面。

春雨四题之一《长沙.岳麓山》

竹掩潭映爱晚亭,雾锁云封岳麓峰。
贪踏夜雨崎岖路,览尽长沙万家灯。

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PostPosted: 2009-08-25 06:34:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋斑,首首好,转结犹好。学习了!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-25 22:22:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

一组好诗,学习欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-18 07:34:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

又一方天 wrote:
十年前一首旧作,将秋叶顶出水面。

春雨四题之一《长沙.岳麓山》

竹掩潭映爱晚亭,雾锁云封岳麓峰。
贪踏夜雨崎岖路,览尽长沙万家灯。


贪踏夜雨崎岖路,览尽长沙万家灯--没有亲历其境写不出。

谢谢又一方天大作,近来甚忙,迟复为歉。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-18 07:35:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
秋斑,首首好,转结犹好。学习了!


谢谢冰清老师赞赏,久违了。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-18 07:40:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

是有缘 wrote:
一组好诗,学习欣赏。


有缘万里诗坛会,把酒临风盼佳篇。
谢谢赏读。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-19 02:50:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

“枕石待涛声”犹爱此句意境。问好!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-20 16:53:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

米运刚 wrote:
“枕石待涛声”犹爱此句意境。问好!


谢谢米兄垂爱该句,有人亦然,当时喝醉了,没地方睡觉啊 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-09-21 03:36:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

果然有趣。醉后无论睡在哪里枕着什么,都诗意盎然。
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