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题文革(旧作新改)
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PostPosted: 2009-02-20 18:06:43    Post subject: 题文革(旧作新改) Reply with quote

题文革(旧作新改)

主席挥手一声号,亿万国人发狂飙。
斗友斗亲多怨恨,反修反帝少邦交。
九月九日龙归天,三落三起凤还巢。
闹剧荒唐留笑柄,反思历史悸难消。

(腹联有个别出律,为了不因词害意,故没修改。)
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 16:48:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

古韵新音. Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 17:02:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

"文革"应彻底否定.庆宏诗以证之.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 19:06:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢白水兄及黄老师赏读。文革遗祸,后患无穷;回首往事,痛定思痛。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 21:53:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

理不错,但诗味少些。个人感觉,说错见恕,呵呵
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 23:04:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

文革,作为一段历史,应该认真研究。但是,实际上有许多东西是还没有客观的、公开的。我觉得。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 23:11:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

比如58年的大跃进。人们的具体表现,我们也只看到一点点。
去年,我碰到一个农民,当年当村长。他们有一年把粮食收起来后又叫农民偷回去了。一个乡的人全部这样。这个人现在仍健在,而他们乡很少饿死人。他们也没有受整。
而我的家和那里只仅仅隔一条河,这里就一家一家的死。如果不是我身边发生的,我也不会相信。
你们是否会相信这样的事情呢?
同一个时代,同一个社会,同一个国家,同一个政党的领导下,竟然会有这样大的差别?
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PostPosted: 2009-02-22 04:53:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

南之北 wrote:
理不错,但诗味少些。个人感觉,说错见恕,呵呵


南兄说得不错。但诗的题材广泛,可以写景写情,可以言志言政。写景写情的诗味往往与言志言政的诗味有所不同。谢谢赏阅,问好。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-22 04:57:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢鱼兄赏读。对已过去文革和大跃进,由于公开的内部资料有限,研究就不可能深入。只能有所感慨而已。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-22 06:05:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

斗友斗亲多怨恨,反修反帝少邦交。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-22 06:37:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

野航 wrote:
斗友斗亲多怨恨,反修反帝少邦交。


内多怨恨,外少邦交。真是文革特色啊!

腹联平仄我无法修改,请野航兄援手!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-24 03:09:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

我们的确只能发发感慨。历史难说,我觉得。
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