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明月清风9
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Posted: 2007-02-26 07:14:19 Post subject: 请指点

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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2007-02-26 07:57:50 Post subject:

唱和传递着友情, 欣赏

莹雪
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Joined: 28 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2007-02-26 16:20:31 Post subject:

不错。

明月清风9
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Joined: 21 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2007-02-27 03:36:07 Post subject:

谢二位.

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