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Posted: 2009-02-09 05:28:49 Post subject: 理发

精品发廊的门槛太高高的我不知往何处落脚生怕这一脚踩下去会疼的自己跳起老高 ——半个月的血汗外加一头辛辛苦苦才长势良好的茅草小洗头房又太小暧昧的在街道的拐角招摇和一家臭名昭著的行政单位住对门是它至高无上的荣耀洗头只是一个代名词就像人大代表小黑屋里挤满了床床上横七竖八的躺满了嚎叫在陌生的城市理一次发就是上一回战场两种较量剑拔弩张 _________________ 在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑

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Posted: 2009-02-09 07:25:35 Post subject:

——半个月的血汗外加一头辛辛苦苦才长势良好的茅草寓意很生动 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2009-02-09 14:08:39 Post subject:

生动, 有趣, 令人捧腹后的思索

安红红
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Posted: 2009-02-10 06:58:54 Post subject:

呵呵，也蛮搞笑的～遇到这样的状况～怕也只能提心吊胆的走一遭了～问好～ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

孙国福
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Posted: 2009-02-11 06:41:35 Post subject:

谢谢诸位诗友点评！望多提宝贵意见！ _________________ 在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-02-13 22:59:13 Post subject:

非常欣赏。好勇气！诗也不错！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

孙国福
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Posted: 2009-02-14 02:39:36 Post subject:

谢谢点评！常沟通！！祝愉快！！ _________________ 在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑

爱月
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Posted: 2009-02-14 03:07:49 Post subject:

有节奏的诗。问候您！ _________________ 诗歌、诗剧。以文会友。http://blog.sina.com.cn/juneraiyue112

孙国福
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Posted: 2009-02-14 14:24:39 Post subject:

谢谢点评！祝愉快！ _________________ 在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-02-15 18:32:18 Post subject:

你的头发理得蛮高级的么？ _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

杨海军
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Posted: 2009-02-15 19:12:25 Post subject:

洗头只是一个代名词就像人大代表小黑屋里挤满了床床上横七竖八的躺满了嚎叫 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2009-02-18 13:18:52 Post subject:

和一家臭名昭著的行政单位住对门是它至高无上的荣耀犀利，文笔精道！ _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2009-02-21 02:37:35 Post subject:

嘿嘿，诙谐中完成一幅完整的画！欣赏！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

孙国福
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Posted: 2009-02-22 03:24:15 Post subject:

谢谢提读！多提宝贵意见！ _________________ 在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑

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