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2009年的第一场雨
李振
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 10:05:30    Post subject: 2009年的第一场雨 Reply with quote

2009年的第一场雨

2009年的第一场雨,
在元宵节的前一天
喜然落下

细雨中
小鸟在枝头上欢唱
滚滚沱河水
激起千层浪
山涧小溪
流动着滚烫的音符


干枯的中原
已经有两个月雨滴未下
麦苗即将旱死
我可怜的农民兄弟呀
每天起个大早
冒着严寒去弄水浇地
多么幸苦啊!

在这,我将"借花献佛"
借正月十五的焰火
元宵节的花灯
代表中原的父老乡亲
向上苍道谢了
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轩雨抚梦
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 16:32:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

我是在山沟里长大的
感觉诗句"细雨中
小鸟在枝头上欢唱"有些失真,一般雨中常有燕子才叫,小鸟一般不会叫吧!
嘿嘿!斗胆一说!也不知道自己观察细不细!
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李振
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 16:58:00    Post subject: 燕 Reply with quote

轩雨抚梦 wrote:
我是在山沟里长大的
...
燕子算小鸟不?鸟可以分为大鸟小鸟.......
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中国湖北:文胜
秀才


Joined: 20 Dec 2007
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Location: 中国湖北省襄樊市
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 21:45:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

管中窥豹。阅读。
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无他。爱诗,仅此。
诗心、歌爱、走路。足矣!
个人网站http://blog.sina.com.cn/ak5hmwz79sytbd0d
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安红红
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Joined: 07 Feb 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-02-22 08:35:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

已读~

问好~
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2009-02-22 14:45:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

在这,我将"借花献佛"
借正月十五的焰火
元宵节的花灯
代表中原的父老乡亲
向上苍道谢了
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751
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李振
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PostPosted: 2009-02-28 05:26:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好几位!
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