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车过中原(外一首)
李长空
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 03:50:01    Post subject: 车过中原(外一首) Reply with quote

车过中原(外一首)

正午,炙烈的太阳烘烤着大地,皲裂的麦田
灼痛我的视线。那些奄奄一息的禾苗
耷拉着脑袋,它们在苦苦地撑着,枯涩的眸子
即将风干,消瘦的骨头就要燃烧起来

抗旱的老乡们像针芒一样在焦地里坚持着
他们把脸藏在狭小的阴影里,像蒸气一样顶起
矮了下来的天。无垠的麦地铺成一张巨网
焦味的空气弥漫在车厢中,刺痛满车人干裂的心

面对着眼巴巴地坚守在欠收土地上的老乡们
我多么渴望有一根魔杖,能够让涝的地方的雨水
流落到那些干旱的土地上,使所有禾穗
不再干瘪,令敦实的老乡们能够温饱无忧

●车过隧道

阳光明媚的旅途突然失去了光明,滚动的车轮
像一位沧桑的老人在黑暗中穿行。阴冷的风儿
无法感受一颗心灵瞬息之间变化的曲线
伴随着一路颠簸,钢轨与车轮不断磨擦出火花

昏暗的灯光在倒退,对面的旅客嗑起了瓜子
她们轻扬嘴唇,瓜壳连同胭脂味一起
被阴风抛在了后面。“砰”地一声
隔壁包厢又一只啤酒瓶炸在了隧道壁上

虚脱的我来不及闭上眼睛,阳光便如一只巨鸟
猛然撞进瞳孔,把身后的黑暗撕得粉碎
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 04:32:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

长空兄的诗风有所改变,让我更加喜欢了。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 05:27:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

叙景叙感。读来似散文又是诗歌。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 16:28:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

关注!!
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PostPosted: 2009-03-18 18:53:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
长空兄的诗风有所改变,让我更加喜欢了。


紧握兄弟!
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