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《骨子里的春天》（组诗）

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Posted: 2009-02-10 22:13:25 Post subject: 《骨子里的春天》（组诗）

《骨子里的春天》（组诗）文／晴宝儿　《秘密》　坦露年龄，从来不是女人不敢说的秘密清晨花开夜晚的紫，月光扶起蒙古大餐我只吃一次　容颜或红颜，没必要隐藏纸上眼神是小刀，我绝不把它扔上天平要挟你后背不必冰凉，这不是秘密　关着门，别撤下窗户上的木条我不怕灰尘飞舞，我怕满屋的光线让桃花以为春天又来了，来了就不走了　《往事》　别从尘埃中抖落灰白，不禁风的纸张一滴水洇开秘密笔尖弯曲，上个路口选错方向怀中桃花又多一层，残片　细针引线，避开春光避开渗血的字迹，假定纸没有神经镇定自若穿过它们的身体盛开装订，鲜艳成册　花香引来春天，春天认识桃花她在春天，在一页被删除的薄纸里缝好纸张，缝好桃花灯盏，缝平海水打结扣时，她发现灵巧的手指也被缝进纸里了　《桃魂》　春天从树心开始，酥酥痒痒春风拂过老枝，这些小虫像春天的小奸细吮着汁液，频探头，咬向新枝咬出粉红的伤痕　桃花从来在春天歌明媚之上，一株桃花病在春天你留下的伤口，濯濯山泉，灼灼桃华最红的一盏经泉入海漂流至今，未归　 “夹岸桃花蘸水开” 桃花丛，眉心痣，妖妖拈花花素净春风缘花，小虫钻，一钻就入了骨　《春天的海》　站在海边，春天真的来了桃花远远躲避着，柳叶刀上的春光软绿的缨，阳光晃一晃小缎子生出一朵朵　掐一尖绿，柳笛飞歌红船游如梭，画舫天然色 “浮沉随浪记今朝” 春风吹起她的桃花，忧伤不治而愈　写下春望望天，在水一方满眼沙砾都是桃，小剪刀上系红绸睁一眼闭一眼，掷向春天的海　春天，一片湖也是海比如什刹海，一棵桃也没有的后海夭夭灼灼 2009年2月7日. _________________ 晴宝儿

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Posted: 2009-02-11 00:52:09 Post subject:

我不怕灰尘飞舞，我怕满屋的光线让桃花以为春天又来了，来了就不走了春天真的来了~几首都不错，语言优美，有种音乐节奏美~

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Posted: 2009-02-11 01:48:41 Post subject:

读这样的诗歌～仿佛一株桃花荡漾于碧波间～且行且吟～饮尽花事～～喜欢～ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2009-02-11 12:35:33 Post subject:

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Posted: 2009-02-11 15:01:03 Post subject:

前来学习并问好！！！

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Posted: 2009-02-11 19:57:23 Post subject:

跃度恰到好处！读！！

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Posted: 2009-02-12 00:43:09 Post subject:

学习！欣赏！！！ _________________ 在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑

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Posted: 2009-02-12 03:29:50 Post subject:

春天从树心开始，酥酥痒痒春风拂过老枝，这些小虫像春天的小奸细吮着汁液，频探头，咬向新枝咬出粉红的伤痕灵动而充满意趣！

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Posted: 2009-02-13 10:07:15 Post subject:

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我不怕灰尘飞舞，我怕满屋的光线让桃花以为
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好看的照片，明月常来，情人节快乐！
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Posted: 2009-02-13 10:07:55 Post subject:

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读这样的诗歌～仿佛一株桃花荡漾于碧波间～且行且吟～饮尽花事～～
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红红好，温暖的名字！
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Posted: 2009-02-13 10:09:35 Post subject:

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握手春天！很高兴在朋友们中间，也成为本站的驻站
谢谢美丽的花~~~祝春天好心情！
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Posted: 2009-02-13 10:10:23 Post subject:

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跃度恰到好处！读！！

问好！感谢感受！
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Posted: 2009-02-13 19:27:08 Post subject:

关着门，别撤下窗户上的木条我不怕灰尘飞舞，我怕满屋的光线让桃花以为春天又来了，来了就不走了 _________________ 诗是水，起于泥土，止于泥土，是自然的流露。

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Posted: 2009-02-18 13:22:07 Post subject:

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学习！欣赏！！！

互相学习！
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Posted: 2009-02-18 13:22:58 Post subject:

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春天从树心开始，酥酥痒痒
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谢谢感受！
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Posted: 2009-02-18 13:23:29 Post subject:

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关着门，别撤下窗户上的木条
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问好！
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Posted: 2009-02-18 17:22:46 Post subject:

沉浸在你无比美好的春天里～～ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2009-03-09 08:37:35 Post subject:

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沉浸在你无比美好的春天里～～

问好，感谢关注！
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Posted: 2009-03-10 03:13:39 Post subject:

再来读,更有味~~ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2009-03-10 09:55:34 Post subject:

狠诗！恨美！但是不是可以做得更好，透彻到如一滴晨露与一叶褶辉比如《秘密》--敞开的心却又欲迎还拒，到底女儿家。《往事》思往事忆流芳易成伤--欧阳修说的往事乃不可追，何况沦陷的手指。所以抽身而行，往事将会是一重譬喻，创造总是在往事死去之后进行。后两首重意识，亦古亦今

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