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越搔越搔.花了五仙
野航
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 15:52:53    Post subject: 越搔越搔.花了五仙 Reply with quote

临江仙

插柳岂如栽柳,思乡何似还乡.今朝梦醒又茫茫.
难消门外雪,易得镜中霜.
草长江南江北,莺飞山麓山冈.十年流水忆湖湘.
自从枫叶赤,未见稻花黄.

可惜五湖倦客,犹嗟四水春光.平生心迹两相妨.
功名安可望,诗酒送清狂.
油菜遍山金库,梨花一树银行.桃源虽在亦堪伤.
青山如不改,终有白云藏.

少小情迷赤县,青春梦锁寒窗.故将山月入行装.
长江相送尽,飞渡太平洋.
到底一生何短,依然两袖难长.闲看虎变复龙骧.
难开苏铁树,且种郁金香.

翠竹青槐绿柳,甜橙苦楝香樟.山村风物旧时光.
乌鸦虚报丧,麻雀实偷粮.
溪小却多鱼鳖,人穷不避风霜.儿童偏爱捉迷藏.
但求三顿饱,未解四时忙.

坡上一畦蚕豆,山中半亩鱼塘.当年桃李艳吾乡.
酒扶朝睡足,书伴夜灯长.
绿橘哪堪离别,黄莺难耐凄凉.闻言丘陇久抛荒.
清溪流百折,颇似诉愁肠.

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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 16:22:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

野航兄思乡愁绪,溢流笔端。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 16:39:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

搔的不错 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 21:25:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

淡淡乡愁和乡恋,尽在野航一搔间.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-11 04:33:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

难消门外雪,易得镜中霜.——警句!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-11 06:36:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

把<临江仙>写得词味浓浓的!
忆乡情长...十年流水忆湖湘;
百折衷肠...黄莺难耐凄凉;
思絮荡漾...今朝梦醒又茫茫;
更深雪寒...易得镜中霜.
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笛里关山.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-11 08:05:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
难消门外雪,易得镜中霜.——警句!


乡愁愁白头!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-11 13:53:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜读佳作。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-12 15:27:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
冰清 wrote:
难消门外雪,易得镜中霜.——警句!


乡愁愁白头!


我们都是经过了加国严冬考验的,自然共鸣容易.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-12 16:20:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

“少小情迷赤县,青春梦锁寒窗.故将山月入行装.
长江相送尽,飞渡太平洋.
到底一生何短,依然两袖难长.闲看虎变复龙骧.
难开苏铁树,且种郁金香. ”

写得何等真切,何等形象。拜读了。真可谓:

越洋跨海二十年,
真知求索人未还。
每近佳节乡思苦,
临江仙曲梦团圆。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-12 17:04:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

沧桑岁月,壮志难酬!
热血一腔,空对神州!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-13 11:32:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢他乡客兄和庆宏兄赠诗-----
无用之牢骚,其实不发也罢,说穿了还是手痒.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-15 04:34:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

愁绪满船,待归航,看野航
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PostPosted: 2009-02-16 23:43:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

佳作也,拜赏叹服兄倚马之才情。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-17 09:33:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

王君明 wrote:
佳作也,拜赏叹服兄倚马之才情。


兄过奖了,写词我是门外汉,偶尔心血来潮,胡弄了几个,合不合谱都不太确.
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