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早春
三弦儿
童生


Joined: 10 Oct 2008
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PostPosted: 2009-02-16 20:30:08    Post subject: 早春 Reply with quote

早春把冬天赶到了枯树上
受伤的她,匍匐在草地
和刚冒牙的嫩草细语
那星星点点的嫩绿
是春的血在燃烧

风把消息,从天涯海角送来
园子里的迎春,绽苞了
站在桥上翘首
望春的你,是我心中的一点绿
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PostPosted: 2009-02-17 05:44:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

这首不错~转的乖巧新鲜~到位了
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-02-17 17:44:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言, 意境都不错。
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吟啸徐行
举人


Joined: 03 May 2008
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PostPosted: 2009-02-17 19:49:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

望春的你,是我心中的一点绿

欣赏!
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