三弦儿 童生
Joined: 10 Oct 2008 Posts: 68
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安红红 同进士出身

Joined: 07 Feb 2009 Posts: 1808
安红红Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-17 05:44:38 Post subject: |
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这首不错~转的乖巧新鲜~到位了 _________________ 如果不开始,会失去过程。
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微信:qisebaihuayuan |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-17 17:44:15 Post subject: |
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语言, 意境都不错。 |
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吟啸徐行 举人
Joined: 03 May 2008 Posts: 1336 Location: 中国安徽 吟啸徐行Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-17 19:49:49 Post subject: |
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望春的你,是我心中的一点绿
欣赏! _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活. |
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