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《昨夜春风又几何》(外一首)
沈奕军
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PostPosted: 2009-02-14 18:57:47    Post subject: 《昨夜春风又几何》(外一首) Reply with quote

《昨夜春风又几何》(外一首)
作者:沈奕军
昨夜天空
一滴雨
淋湿我刚点燃的烟头

雨后的天空
找不到一丝凉意
村庄遗失的灯光
一次次点燃我
带病的心灵
路边没有车辆
几对热恋中的青年
用春风拂写2月14的爱

女友睡了
陪同女友的布娃娃
也不再说话
可是在这个夜晚
我一直徘徊在江边路口
真希望被夜融化
被春风吹散

昨夜春风
是否宣告冬的结束

《二月十四》
二月十四
我想约我的女友
一起喝茶 吃饭
逛我们熟悉的超市
并盘算
送她一朵玫瑰花

我跑到她工作的地方
将我的想法表达
当天的天气晴见多云
女友像拒绝春天一样
把我推向悬崖

离开女友
我的内心找不出
一个形容词修饰
只感觉天空被谁戳了个洞
漫天的雪花
落入脚下


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PostPosted: 2009-02-14 19:49:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

提赏,还需加深!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-14 20:27:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

有生活。但还要深入挖掘,提炼,打开。
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