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青铜之恋
青山绿水
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PostPosted: 2009-02-14 05:05:10    Post subject: 青铜之恋 Reply with quote

序:在湖北省博物馆“曾侯乙展厅”中,我看到有很多陪葬的棺木,据介绍,那棺木里有一些是十几岁的少女乐工。

那一年,我和你一起出土
其实我不是只有一堆白骨
我还有血肉

那一夜,你用叮叮咚咚的乐音
赢得了我 —— 一个少女的初夜
我沐浴在春的深处
浴池里是山花酿的酒

你不是青铜
你是青铜的故事
我不是乐工
我是你的爱人

王朝更迭
你我长相厮守
大墓开启
你歌喉清亮,我青丝依旧

挥舞起我的长袖
在你五个半八度的音域里畅游
挥舞起我的长袖
爱的传奇转调如初
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爱青山绿水,爱梦里家园,爱红颜知己,爱一个纯粹的世界……
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白水
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白水Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-14 08:51:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

那一年,我和你一起出土
其实我不是只有一堆白骨
我还有血肉

开头就抓住了读者的视线
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