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关于雪的抒情

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Posted: 2007-02-23 18:48:26 Post subject: 关于雪的抒情

<<一场细密的雪开始下了>> 夜晚发着低烧没人相信隔世的风已坍塌了陈年的衣袍是谁靠近了我靠近了扑面而来的苍茫今夜,我住在哪儿灯光给我一个虚假的暗示有多少事物不被人知哈着气,伸起尚未捂热的肢体没有理由逃避黑夜就像没有理由惧怕风烛残年这碾不碎的日子一场细密的雪开始下了我无法遏制一场一场的冷 <另一个冬天> 现在,那些陈旧的大雪覆盖了乌鸦的嘴唇覆盖了高处紧迫的时光这让我再次翻动你的衣袖让腊月的风，吹得更起劲打开的窗子,没有被虫子蛀空另一个冬天怎样哽在我的喉头窃笑吐出清灯孤影的风而我，加厚衣杉轻嘘一个女人的寒冷《上升的雪》上升的雪在词语之外崩裂它的秩序依旧在长安大街迅速苍白依旧是光与冰尖锐的呼喊没有什么能让它覆盖了除了在这样的天气里、我从树下经过，像草隐去了季节的疲惫然后把冬天的音响留在枝上让雪一直被误解的天空移动我固执地这样想，墙壁很干净《大雪散布了过多的谎言》我们总是一再走出试图解析一个命名至另一个命名的辨认和追问 “雪”是一个具有硬品质的词一次次冲破我的骨骼没有梯子可以拉长耳朵那些进进出出的人都变得像呵气那么稀薄到处都是配钥匙的人彼此只隔着一两个句子大雪散布了过多的谎言我们不可能走的更远

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Posted: 2007-02-24 03:52:12 Post subject: 喜欢这种语言和格调！

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Posted: 2007-02-24 14:57:45 Post subject:

很有灵气, 语言感觉很好转折点都很有技巧 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-02-24 19:03:53 Post subject:

等你春天的歌, 问好

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Posted: 2007-02-24 21:21:15 Post subject:

学习好诗

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Posted: 2007-02-27 04:09:37 Post subject: 问好三姐~

先欣赏你的诗,再告诉你:书收到了,很感谢你

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Posted: 2007-02-27 05:36:38 Post subject:

雪意绵绵迷人。节前之道来大连我们一聚，我特意打听了你的近况，祝福！ _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

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Posted: 2007-02-28 00:22:49 Post subject:

拜读慢慢领会；）。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-02-28 00:44:03 Post subject:

西西,姐姐我来了

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Posted: 2007-02-28 07:12:33 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

很有灵气, 语言感觉很好

转折点都很有技巧

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兄弟多批才是哦

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Posted: 2007-02-28 07:13:39 Post subject: 好啊，下次就发春天了,哈,问好呢.

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等你春天的歌, 问好 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-02-28 07:14:52 Post subject: Re: 问好三姐~

孙慧峰 wrote:

先欣赏你的诗,再告诉你:书收到了,很感谢你 Smile

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收到我就放心了，问好小弟.

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Posted: 2007-02-28 20:32:34 Post subject:

左岸 wrote:

雪意绵绵迷人。节前之道来大连我们一聚，我特意打听了你的近况，祝福！

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Posted: 2007-03-05 11:03:35 Post subject:

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Quote:

<另一个冬天>

现在,那些陈旧的大雪
覆盖了乌鸦的嘴唇
覆盖了高处紧迫的时光
这让我再次翻动你的衣袖
让腊月的风，吹得更起劲

打开的窗子,没有被虫子蛀空
另一个冬天
怎样哽在我的喉头
窃笑吐出清灯孤影的风
而我，加厚衣杉
轻嘘一个女人的寒冷

。

觉得这首，比其他的高了两层　！ Cool

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