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七律和采菊东篱《加国初雪》

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Posted: 2009-02-10 13:13:44 Post subject: 七律和采菊东篱《加国初雪》

七律和采菊东篱《加国初雪》寄诗犹叹漂泊艰，岁月沧桑忆旧年。西域品茗思陆羽，东篱采卉作陶潜。曾经商海识风浪，今有沙龙博笑颜。雏凤高飞欲展翅，冰消雪化到春天。（注）（注）：友人千金已获大学录取采菊东篱原玉：加国初雪十月飘鸿不期遇，蹉跎岁月又一年。紫枫瑟瑟枯林暗，白羽纷纷暮色潜。万物拥缘送旧貌，蛾眉无幸换新颜。遥临托体同山处，莫负残宵晚照天。注：陶潜《挽歌》有云：死去何所道，托体同山阿。

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Posted: 2009-02-10 16:37:53 Post subject:

西域品茗思陆羽, 好

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Posted: 2009-02-10 21:43:18 Post subject:

唱和俱佳. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2009-02-11 05:59:36 Post subject:

"冰消雪化到春天" 好! 朝前看! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-02-11 08:09:25 Post subject:

谢谢两白兄及黄老师雅评！

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Posted: 2009-02-15 12:40:01 Post subject:

西域品茗思陆羽，东篱采卉作陶潜。 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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Posted: 2009-02-16 06:48:29 Post subject:

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西域品茗思陆羽，东篱采卉作陶潜。

谢野航兄关注！

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Posted: 2009-02-17 10:17:14 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

七律和采菊东篱《加国初雪》
寄诗犹叹漂泊艰，岁月沧桑忆旧年。
西域品茗思陆羽，东篱采卉作陶潜。
曾经商海识风浪，今有沙龙博笑颜。
雏凤高飞欲展翅，冰消雪化到春天。（注）
（注）：友人千金已获大学录取
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坚贞之操，感天动地。
结句最妙!

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Posted: 2009-02-17 16:47:36 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

坚贞之操，感天动地。
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谢冰清老师雅评！

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