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七律 和采菊东篱《加国初雪》
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 13:13:44    Post subject: 七律 和采菊东篱《加国初雪》 Reply with quote

七律 和采菊东篱《加国初雪》

寄诗犹叹漂泊艰,岁月沧桑忆旧年。
西域品茗思陆羽,东篱采卉作陶潜。
曾经商海识风浪,今有沙龙博笑颜。
雏凤高飞欲展翅,冰消雪化到春天。(注)


(注):友人千金已获大学录取

采菊东篱原玉:
加国初雪
十月飘鸿不期遇,蹉跎岁月又一年。
紫枫瑟瑟枯林暗,白羽纷纷暮色潜。
万物拥缘送旧貌,蛾眉无幸换新颜。
遥临托体同山处,莫负残宵晚照天。

注:陶潜《挽歌》有云:死去何所道,托体同山阿。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 16:37:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

西域品茗思陆羽, 好
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 21:43:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

唱和俱佳.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-11 05:59:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

"冰消雪化到春天" 好! 朝前看!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-11 08:09:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢两白兄及黄老师雅评!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-15 12:40:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

西域品茗思陆羽,东篱采卉作陶潜。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-16 06:48:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

野航 wrote:
西域品茗思陆羽,东篱采卉作陶潜。


谢野航兄关注!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-17 10:17:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
七律 和采菊东篱《加国初雪》
寄诗犹叹漂泊艰,岁月沧桑忆旧年。
西域品茗思陆羽,东篱采卉作陶潜。
曾经商海识风浪,今有沙龙博笑颜。
雏凤高飞欲展翅,冰消雪化到春天。(注)
(注):友人千金已获大学录取
...

坚贞之操,感天动地。
结句最妙!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-17 16:47:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
七律 和采菊东篱《加国初雪》
寄诗犹叹漂泊艰,岁月沧桑忆旧年。
西域品茗思陆羽,东篱采卉作陶潜。
曾经商海识风浪,今有沙龙博笑颜。
雏凤高飞欲展翅,冰消雪化到春天。(注)
(注):友人千金已获大学录取
...

坚贞之操,感天动地。
...


谢冰清老师雅评!
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