黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-07 00:41:44 Post subject: 鹊桥仙.渝州两江观桥 |
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鹊桥仙.渝州两江观桥
长虹饮涧,
金龙腾谷,
更喜三秋鹊渡.
两江飞岸立高墩,
暮霭里铁桥难数.
绿杨新月,
竖琴玉拱,
薄雾轻车云路.
珊瑚坝上跃朝暾,
举目望彩霞浴鹜
注:两江,指长江和嘉陵江.重庆市区形如半岛,夹于两江之间.
珊瑚坝,长江中的一个小岛.
在重庆辖区内,有五千多座桥梁,其中长江上已建成特大桥梁12
座,在建的还有8座,嘉陵江上已建成的公路桥梁12座,预计分2020
年,重庆城区将出现32座大桥,桥梁已和这座城市的发展血脉相连,其规模之大,桥型之多,速度之快,功能之全,桥形之美,在世界独一无二,故有人誉之为"桥都".
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喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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lulu 秀才

Joined: 25 Jan 2009 Posts: 264 Location: dream home luluCollection |
Posted: 2009-02-07 04:01:54 Post subject: |
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lulu给黄老师拜年!祝福您合家欢乐,幸福安康!
您的诗很大气,很壮观,欣赏!学习了!
和一首小诗,略表敬意,见笑了!请多多指教!
唯有金石藏典雅,挥毫润笔舞芬芳。
竹菊远眺梅兰望,四溢花香沁满堂。 _________________ 荣辱不惊, 闲看亭前花开花落; 去留无意, 漫随天外云卷云舒 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-07 04:54:00 Post subject: |
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真正古韵新音, 好  |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2009-02-07 06:38:21 Post subject: |
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黄老师的词让我怀念山城! |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-07 08:38:32 Post subject: |
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竖琴玉拱,薄雾轻车云路. 黄兄诗既宏扬又秀丽! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-07 17:12:59 Post subject: |
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诚谢lulu的祝福.祝您新春快乐!谢您的赐诗.
您的题头联语中的"幔"字作"帐幕"讲,应为"漫"字,乃无限制无约束之意,供参考. _________________ ++++++++++++++
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-07 17:20:12 Post subject: |
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谢白水,庆宏,白云兄赏评和鼓励. _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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lulu 秀才

Joined: 25 Jan 2009 Posts: 264 Location: dream home luluCollection |
Posted: 2009-02-07 22:29:57 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
诚谢lulu的祝福.祝您新春快乐!谢您的赐诗.
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谢黄老师的提示!学生已更正,请您多多赐教! _________________ 荣辱不惊, 闲看亭前花开花落; 去留无意, 漫随天外云卷云舒 |
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王君明 秀才

Joined: 03 Apr 2007 Posts: 250 Location: 甘肃天水 王君明Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-10 06:17:10 Post subject: |
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拜赏,为之深受感染。问候! _________________ 虚拟网络 真实生活 |
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野航 秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 547 Location: toronto 野航Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-10 15:48:34 Post subject: |
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这个词牌用得真贴切. _________________ 回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-10 21:52:20 Post subject: |
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揖谢君明野航赏阅. _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-11 14:10:46 Post subject: |
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喜读黄老师好词。自开篇就气势非凡,如读“落霞与孤鹜齐飞,秋水共长天一色”。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-11 17:34:27 Post subject: |
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有缘兄过奖,请多批评指正.问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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老山 秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 319
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Posted: 2009-02-12 01:05:14 Post subject: |
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好词,学习了!“长虹饮涧, 金龙腾谷”, “绿杨新月, 竖琴玉拱”又宏又雅, 欣赏。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-12 17:51:25 Post subject: |
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揖谢老山兄雅评,问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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