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鹊桥仙.渝州两江观桥
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PostPosted: 2009-02-07 00:41:44    Post subject: 鹊桥仙.渝州两江观桥 Reply with quote

鹊桥仙.渝州两江观桥

长虹饮涧,
金龙腾谷,
更喜三秋鹊渡.
两江飞岸立高墩,
暮霭里铁桥难数.


绿杨新月,
竖琴玉拱,
薄雾轻车云路.
珊瑚坝上跃朝暾,
举目望彩霞浴鹜

注:两江,指长江和嘉陵江.重庆市区形如半岛,夹于两江之间.
珊瑚坝,长江中的一个小岛.
在重庆辖区内,有五千多座桥梁,其中长江上已建成特大桥梁12
座,在建的还有8座,嘉陵江上已建成的公路桥梁12座,预计分2020
年,重庆城区将出现32座大桥,桥梁已和这座城市的发展血脉相连,其规模之大,桥型之多,速度之快,功能之全,桥形之美,在世界独一无二,故有人誉之为"桥都".



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PostPosted: 2009-02-07 04:01:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

lulu给黄老师拜年!祝福您合家欢乐,幸福安康!
您的诗很大气,很壮观,欣赏!学习了!
和一首小诗,略表敬意,见笑了!请多多指教!

唯有金石藏典雅,挥毫润笔舞芬芳。
竹菊远眺梅兰望,四溢花香沁满堂。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-07 04:54:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

真正古韵新音, 好 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-02-07 06:38:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老师的词让我怀念山城!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-07 08:38:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

竖琴玉拱,薄雾轻车云路. 黄兄诗既宏扬又秀丽!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-07 17:12:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

诚谢lulu的祝福.祝您新春快乐!谢您的赐诗.

您的题头联语中的"幔"字作"帐幕"讲,应为"漫"字,乃无限制无约束之意,供参考.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-07 17:20:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢白水,庆宏,白云兄赏评和鼓励.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-07 22:29:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
诚谢lulu的祝福.祝您新春快乐!谢您的赐诗.
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谢黄老师的提示!学生已更正,请您多多赐教!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 06:17:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜赏,为之深受感染。问候!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 15:48:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个词牌用得真贴切.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 21:52:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

揖谢君明野航赏阅.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-11 14:10:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜读黄老师好词。自开篇就气势非凡,如读“落霞与孤鹜齐飞,秋水共长天一色”。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-11 17:34:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

有缘兄过奖,请多批评指正.问好!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-12 01:05:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

好词,学习了!“长虹饮涧, 金龙腾谷”, “绿杨新月, 竖琴玉拱”又宏又雅, 欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-12 17:51:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

揖谢老山兄雅评,问好!
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