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消瘦的时光(外一首)
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PostPosted: 2009-02-09 18:54:22    Post subject: 消瘦的时光(外一首) Reply with quote

消瘦的时光

时光 一天天消瘦
瘦到 一阵风吹倒
我竭尽全力
扶不起 一场霜雪

等鸟鸣 从我怀里
拉一把
时光站起来
瘦骨嶙峋

阳光 上路
我开始放手
把心情 交给春雨

回忆

水 皱了一下眉
它的明眸 闪出
一条计谋

炙手可热的船
拖着我的影子
摇亮 一河灯火

水声潺潺
时光倒流
一座小城
慌乱在码头
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 06:20:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

水 皱了一下眉
它的明眸 闪出

很柔美
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PostPosted: 2009-02-11 14:58:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

前来学习并问候!!
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