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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-02-09 13:37:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
情真意切的一首,有感染力.


谢谢赵福治, 元宵快乐 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-02-09 13:38:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

惠远飞 wrote:
三千六百五十个日日夜夜,足以对
...


谢谢惠远飞, 希望读到你更多的作品
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PostPosted: 2009-02-09 13:39:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

晴宝儿 wrote:
东北朋友回国,热烈欢迎!
拥抱热土,挥别离情!


问好宝儿, 元宵快乐
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PostPosted: 2009-02-09 13:41:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

游向高原的鱼 wrote:
白水,幸好今天有网络,还能在网上相逢。为不识的查理祝福!


鱼, 上网很难吗?
但愿你今天能上, 祝元宵快乐.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-09 13:52:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
也来祝福下这位东北朋友,一路顺利!


查理, 今天已是元宵节, 猜想你到家这些天, 该看的亲戚朋友应该都看了, 或许已经可以找个地方上网了.
把这个帖顶出来, 诗友们给你的祝福你自己慢慢读吧. 一并转贴和平岛过去写的一首诗歌.知道你喜欢. 祝牛年牛运, 万事如意. Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-02-09 13:54:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

《火龙》
作者:和平岛/加拿大

(十七)

是谁敲锣又打鼓
有谁见过
巨龙的腾飞,在蓝天之上
一圈一圈的腾飞,在白云之上
我要给它取一个
吉祥的名
查理,你为什么哭,好男儿呀

有泪不轻弹,一个移居加拿大多年的
先生,你为什么说着说着
就哭开了呢,一根小小的电线呀
怎么寄托得下,遥远到
天涯海角的
浪迹

就算见着神仙的龙,我也不哭
什么样波澜壮阔的世面
我没见过
亚洲,美洲,欧洲,非洲
哪一座金光灿灿的大山
我不去敲它几锤
哪一座大山上的庙宇
不供奉几个活灵活现的神仙

当东方的鼓点再次响起
天空中传递着
一团巨大无比的火光
我亲切地管她叫
嫦娥,我又自豪地管他叫
神州

查理,我为什么哭了
本来应该高兴的事,你说
你说着说着,我为什么就
热泪盈眶
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PostPosted: 2009-02-09 13:57:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
也来祝福下这位东北朋友,一路顺利!


查理, 今天已是元宵节, 猜想你到家这些天, 该看的亲戚朋友应该都看了, 或许已经可以找个地方上网了.
...


查理光看不贴,对我们太不公平!严重抗议!有吸不呼,会憋坏的。 Laughing Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-02-09 14:03:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy Very Happy QINGHONGH, 你饶他一次, 刚回国很多事要办, 猜想他这两天能上网已是最快速度了, 指不定整天吃香喝辣还晕着呢. Razz
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PostPosted: 2009-02-09 15:14:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
Very Happy Very Happy QINGHONGH, 你饶他一次, 刚回国很多事要办, 猜想他这两天能上网已是最快速度了, 指不定整天吃香喝辣还晕着呢. Razz


他一直袖手旁观,在那里偷着乐! Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-02-09 15:56:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

人生最苦伤别离!情真意切!
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在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑
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PostPosted: 2009-02-09 17:26:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

枫林别

查理,听说你就要走了
走在TORONTO大雪封门的日子
等你踏上故土, 应该是
早春二月
我不想问春寒料峭的江南
是否寒梅吐蕊, 是否有一束
淡黄色的花朵
为你接尘

十年了,十年
三千六百五十个日日夜夜,足以对
一位男子注满沧桑
足以在一张曾经年轻的面颊
刻下满腹经伦

今天, 在这道别的日子
只想请你随意抽出一根, 一根
连绵不断的思绪
一头交给北美低吟浅绘的
文人墨客
一头飘逸江南, 任尔
随风



从一首诗里观察饱满的深情,离别叫更多的人感慨万千,亲情、友情、叫人难以割舍的情结,衬托着字里行间对朋友之绵绵情谊,交织着感染着叫人看后不自觉地跟着感动。好诗,欣赏中——
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诗歌、诗剧。以文会友。http://blog.sina.com.cn/juneraiyue112
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PostPosted: 2009-02-11 14:54:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

来拜个晚年!!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-12 00:34:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗!欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-17 17:17:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
Very Happy Very Happy QINGHONGH, 你饶他一次, 刚回国很多事要办, 猜想他这两天能上网已是最快速度了, 指不定整天吃香喝辣还晕着呢. Razz


他一直袖手旁观,在那里偷着乐! Laughing


好像是这么回事 Wink
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PostPosted: 2009-02-17 17:20:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

孙国福 wrote:
人生最苦伤别离!情真意切!


谢谢国福。相信友谊长存。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-17 17:22:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

爱月 wrote:
枫林别
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谢谢爱月,也喜欢你的诗歌。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-17 17:23:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

子花 wrote:
来拜个晚年!!


谢谢子花, 问好新年。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-29 16:55:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

QINGHONGH, 今天总算歇了口气,明天还要忙Crying or Very sad 赶紧把查理的大作贴上来吧,相信读完你该知道他的近况了, 潇洒着呢 Very Happy Very Happy

一别经月,如隔三秋。
归冰城缩手,驾彩云伸腰。
问金殿圆圆何在,登高楼髯翁稽首。
翠湖水阔翔白羽,罗平风清摇黄花。
泼水现傣女腰素,举火展彝汉膀粗。
无佳人相伴何须垂泪,有老嬢烧菜正好饮酒。
北美枫下旧友时见,无忧网上新事常闻。
何当共醉枫林秋色,再宴多城各路诸侯。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-29 19:16:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

恕我直言,此诗散文化严重,精炼不足,感情表面而直白.
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PostPosted: 2009-04-30 03:18:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢不同意见 Very Happy
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