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等待
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PostPosted: 2009-01-19 19:27:25    Post subject: 等待 Reply with quote

我在湖边写信
写水写天
倾听微远的碧波
一些忽明忽暗的斑点,飘忽不定
水草在风中,千娇百媚

阳光从头顶开始温和
这时如果有一只鸟儿飞向我
一方情意里
那种渴望
成为风景

浮光掠影中
那人没有一点消息
勾得满身的春草,化为剔透的青丝

无力将故事唤醒
低下头,丝丝寒意牵出的清澈
一片透明
心潜为鱼
转来转去

我在湖边
等待。把时间化为水
消融如水
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PostPosted: 2009-01-19 22:05:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言和意象都挺美!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-20 16:41:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

如诗如画
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PostPosted: 2009-02-08 04:38:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

沙漠 wrote:
语言和意象都挺美!
谢谢沙漠
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PostPosted: 2009-02-08 04:40:22    Post subject: 谢白水的阅复,问好。 Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
如诗如画

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