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白水
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Posted: 2007-02-21 06:34:10 Post subject: 正月十五雪打灯

正月十五雪打灯三郎, 不是书生如你不是荒野的灵千年的长发真的乱了? 我举杯向你聊斋茶冷洗一弯残月, 几颗寒星夜, 再等窗外,不见摇曳的流萤? 那是一枚粉碎的钻戒流泪的指捧一盏烛火, 在风中谁能撕破这冰封的帷幔十五的月儿该圆了朋友, 让我们在飘雪的夜路点燃一束温馨

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Posted: 2007-02-21 06:55:31 Post subject:

诗意浓郁的一个，欣赏！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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Posted: 2007-02-21 13:22:09 Post subject:

三郎, 不是书生如你不是荒野的灵好起子。嗯,明白在写什末了. _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
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Posted: 2007-02-21 18:04:00 Post subject:

沙漠 wrote:

诗意浓郁的一个，欣赏！

谢谢沙漠, 还盼多提不足.

白水
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Posted: 2007-02-21 18:05:07 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

三郎, 不是书生
如你不是荒野的灵

好起子。

嗯,明白在写什末了.

写的什么

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Posted: 2007-02-21 18:31:20 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

写的什么

ok, 戏解。

三郎, 不是书生（是老公）
如你不是荒野的灵
千年的长发真的乱了?（长发为他乱）
我举杯向你（独饮）
聊斋茶冷（发呆有一会儿了）
洗一弯残月, 几颗（不圆满）
寒星（惨）

夜, 再等（也等不来他）
窗外,不见摇曳的流萤?
那是一枚粉碎的钻戒（婚戒）
流泪的指
捧一盏烛火, 在风中（惨）

谁能撕破这冰封的帷幔（独睡）
十五的月儿该圆了
。。。
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Posted: 2007-02-21 21:09:14 Post subject:

流畅而又精炼 nobody解得也很妙趣横生 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2007-02-21 22:36:33 Post subject:

哈哈，很难解的，但表达独眠的夫人是肯定的，古人、今人，难说。是唐玄宗么？还是真得聊斋中的书生？或许15来临的时候就知道了。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-02-23 07:17:47 Post subject:

谢谢朋友们, 你们这么一乐, 到也帮我尽可能的释怀了. NOBODY的戏解只能算戏解, 可不是我的原意喔. 不过诗歌写出来就交给读者了, 能解出一乐还真得谢谢你. 问好各位新春愉快

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Posted: 2007-02-23 12:55:22 Post subject:

月光(不知是姐还是妹,anyway)多写几首"谜语"诗, 让NOBODY一一戏解. _________________ 隔海抒情

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Posted: 2007-02-23 18:22:50 Post subject:

谁能撕破这冰封的帷幔十五的月儿该圆了 ___________________ 很精致的句子

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Posted: 2007-02-24 00:23:34 Post subject:

呵呵,月光妹妹好诗,BOBODY解得妙春节问好!

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Posted: 2007-02-24 19:19:50 Post subject:

刘雨萍 wrote:

月光(不知是姐还是妹,anyway)多写几首"谜语"诗, 让NOBODY一一戏解. Very Happy

谢谢雨评. 本来不是谜语被NOBODY解成谜语了,,,,,, Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-02-24 19:22:35 Post subject:

三色堇 wrote:

谁能撕破这冰封的帷幔
十五的月儿该圆了
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很精致的句子

想念西安的元宵节, 孩子们会提着灯笼满节跑, 口中还念着"灯笼会,灯笼会,灯笼灭了回家睡" Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-02-24 19:25:47 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

呵呵,月光妹妹好诗,BOBODY解得妙
春节问好!

月亮, 你可别夸NOBODY, 想过吗? NOBODY就是灵魂......WOW. 怕吗 Confused

搞笑
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Posted: 2007-02-25 00:40:35 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

月亮, 你可别夸NOBODY, 想过吗? NOBODY就是灵魂......WOW. 怕吗 Confused

no, no, no.
我可不是荒野的灵
如三郎, 不是书生
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Posted: 2007-02-26 08:12:21 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

月亮, 你可别夸NOBODY, 想过吗? NOBODY就是灵魂......WOW. 怕吗 Confused

no, no, no.
我可不是荒野的灵
如三郎, 不是书生

在网上, 大家都是影子. 诗歌不过人们出窍的灵魂 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-02-28 00:50:47 Post subject:

白水最近老是古意新写；怀念古国了？ _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-02-28 17:15:11 Post subject:

好意境啊：荒野的灵，千年的发，流泪的指，冰封的幔...... 只可意会不可描绘的一幅画。

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Posted: 2007-02-28 21:04:58 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

三色堇 wrote:

谁能撕破这冰封的帷幔
十五的月儿该圆了
___________________
很精致的句子

想念西安的元宵节, 孩子们会提着灯笼满节跑, 口中还念着"灯笼会,灯笼会,灯笼灭了回家睡" Very Happy

哈哈,大雁塔和南门的大红灯笼很漂亮,有时间回来看看吧.

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