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《亲眼所见一个男人幸福地死去》
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 21:50:50    Post subject: 《亲眼所见一个男人幸福地死去》 Reply with quote

我从夜里如期醒来
惺忪地推开太阳
门外一群人正静静地站着
围观一个男人倒在台阶上的睡姿
所有的人都羡慕他幸福的样子
仰面朝天地躺在雨里
安详如拱出土地的叶片
被黑搁置在太阳客栈的门前
一脸严肃的法医
走上前去看了看
转身对围观的人说
他确实已经死去了
然后翻开他的兜里一文不名
然后撬开他的嘴说:酒醉而亡
从他唯一的身份证上看出
他是一个来打工的民工
只是他的钱都打了酒喝
只是他的酒都醉了幸福
他的样子没有一点痛苦
连痛苦的印记也没有
他确实幸福地死了
让围观的人好生嫉妒
他被汽车拉走了
围观的人不知回到何处
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暗浮烟
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PostPosted: 2009-01-23 01:48:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

他幸福地死了。
我们每人都会死的,
是否也会死的很幸福呢?
其实,怎么死并不重要。
幸福是个相对的概念,
问题的关键是:
现在是不是感觉幸福。
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2009-02-04 00:28:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗歌!我也希望有这样的一天!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-06 04:10:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

狼孩很狼,欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-06 04:14:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

他被汽车拉走了
围观的人不知回到何处
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PostPosted: 2009-02-07 23:46:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

挺好的意境~~幸福是一种现象~~
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