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题赠二首

王君明
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Posted: 2009-02-03 05:34:50 Post subject: 题赠二首

夜读桐树苞先生回忆录《嵩岳青岩》，深感前辈革命生涯之艰难，爰以小诗一枚题赠巍峨嵩岳峙平川，莽莽青岩沧海前。开卷何愁人渐老，回眸应感政新宣。凄风未改拿云志，冷雨难遮欲曙天。更喜明时兰桂发，相携淡定送流年。欣赏王淑兰女史《书画集》，再叠前韵题赠躬耕砚海聚三川，四壁丹青书案前。逸韵悠悠师造化，流芳灼灼意承宣。露凝新霁东篱雨，鸟啭空山南浦天。闲写华章浮淑气，清香淡雅不知年。（桐树苞先生、王淑兰女史系伉俪也，故叠韵以赠。） _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

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Posted: 2009-02-03 06:56:27 Post subject:

君明诗雅流畅,声韵悠扬! 一诗呈坚志:"相携淡定送流年"; 一诗颂淑气:"清香淡雅不知年". 佳也!! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-02-03 16:19:03 Post subject:

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=20107 凄风未改拿云志这个拿字用的别致

王君明
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Posted: 2009-02-03 17:21:37 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

君明诗雅流畅,声韵悠扬! 一诗呈坚志:"相携淡定送流年"; 一诗颂淑气:"清香淡雅不知年". 佳也!!

白云兄多批评，习作“宣”似未稳，恳请赐教。握手！
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Posted: 2009-02-03 17:29:24 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=20107
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谢白水兄鼓励。握手！
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Posted: 2009-02-08 15:09:18 Post subject:

稳中有新,提读. _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

冰清
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Posted: 2009-02-09 07:52:18 Post subject:

凄风壮其节，淡泊明其志。虽未读桐树苞先生、王淑兰女史之诗画集，但其操尚了了可见矣！

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Posted: 2009-02-10 06:08:51 Post subject:

谢野航、冰清二位先生鼓励。问好！ _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

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Posted: 2009-02-11 14:28:07 Post subject:

因人施增，诗作雅配。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

王君明
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Posted: 2009-02-16 23:53:54 Post subject:

谢过是有缘兄鼓励，问好！ _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

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