梅奈何 童生
Joined: 20 Feb 2007 Posts: 75 Location: 天津 梅奈何Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-03 12:32:31 Post subject: 虞美人-爆竹 |
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虞美人-爆竹
文/梅奈何
惊天动地时交子,
爆竹张脾气。
忧愁烦恼化奔雷,
喝令桃红柳绿燕双回。
良辰吉日邀声贺,
炽烈酥心彻。
粉身碎骨为缤纷,
火树银花预示又逢春。 _________________ 梅骨傲严寒,风霜奈我何
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2009-02-03 13:12:37 Post subject: |
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把虞美人词写得炽烈奔放.好! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-03 16:19:57 Post subject: |
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好爽的文笔 |
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王君明 秀才
Joined: 03 Apr 2007 Posts: 250 Location: 甘肃天水 王君明Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-03 17:33:45 Post subject: |
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拜赏。新春快乐! _________________ 虚拟网络 真实生活 |
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