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保养工
轻风吹我衣
童生


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PostPosted: 2009-02-01 14:13:52    Post subject: 保养工 Reply with quote

一双
粗粗啦啦的大手
绣花针般抒情
一垄垄钢铁的庄稼
在你眼里
要比爱上网爱金庸惟独不爱上课的独生子好养
那些轰隆隆的心事
像回家的路 像家里的
瓶瓶罐罐 合着眼也摸得着
什么时候该加油
什么地方 欠
收拾了
都装在你的心里

常年一身油腻腻的工装
成日价与黑兮兮的机件全方位零距离拍拖
大大咧咧的笑容后面
也有小小烦恼 家
虽扎在城里
养大儿子又喂大孙子的父母 还在远方
缝缀那首古诗 那总也追赶不上物价的工资
不但养老婆养儿子
更养着一款 比儿子还老子的

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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2009-02-01 17:37:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

真实的情感让人感动
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赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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PostPosted: 2009-02-01 20:49:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

来自生活的.
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2009-02-01 23:00:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

倒是说出了生活的累。累有其乐也可!
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轻风吹我衣
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PostPosted: 2009-02-04 15:55:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢过赵老师!谢过韩老师!多多指教!
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