野航
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 Posted: 2009-01-29 14:58:11 Post subject: 两个黄鹂鸣翠柳 |
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当白鹭的突击队把青天切成两半
外语系的两只黄鹂,正在柳条翠绿的帘子里,把弹舌音操练
我用一只窗框,从长年积雪的西山
取下四方形的一块,校正为七言绝句的格式
门口的一条大船,已经把春天装满
原题<<绝句四首之三>>
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韩少君
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| Posted: 2009-01-29 18:15:38 Post subject: niaoyu |
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鸟语把外语系装满
黄鹂把春天装满
你把诗歌装满
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白水
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| Posted: 2009-02-01 05:13:16 Post subject: |
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| 对我来说中国鸟和外国鸟都一样,都是鸟语 |
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轻风吹我衣
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nobody
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| Posted: 2009-02-02 17:55:01 Post subject: |
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很开阔的随笔小诗
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2009-02-02 18:22:38 Post subject: |
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| 有鸟语就能闻到花香，春天来了~问候野航~ |
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野航
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| Posted: 2009-02-04 14:25:38 Post subject: |
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| 轻风吹我衣 wrote: |
| 好喜欢这首，可是，黄鹂为什么要是外语系的呢？ |
哦,我把听不懂的语言统称鸟语,亦称外语.
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