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我在午夜敲你的门

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Posted: 2009-02-01 14:10:25 Post subject: 我在午夜敲你的门

整个尘世大概把我们遗忘了那有什么关系哪？因为我一想到你就有一种无由的幸福灵感应约而至我兴冲冲披衣下床推门而出深夜轻敲你的门邀你共饮午夜的红酒你会陪我吗？在不朽的北斗七星下我醉守你沉默的金并缠着你说我觉得世界上有一种花四季都香日夜都香 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-02-01 14:15:03 Post subject:

叨叨家滴门上着锁～嘿 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2009-02-01 18:15:53 Post subject:

好诗【尘世】把我们忘了那是我们超尘脱俗灵感相应而约

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Posted: 2009-02-01 18:56:09 Post subject:

别敲, 会把我吵醒的

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Posted: 2009-02-02 09:36:42 Post subject:

最后一段是神来之笔。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2009-02-02 09:45:25 Post subject: 谁家门不上锁？说说。。。光顾去。

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叨叨家滴门上着锁～
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Posted: 2009-02-02 18:59:31 Post subject: 嗯，好久没有读到诗盗的人了

_________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-02-02 19:34:49 Post subject: 谢谢谬赞！那天晚上和群组的人熬夜玩，写的

_________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-02-02 19:35:48 Post subject: 当当当当~~~！！！

_________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-02-02 19:36:56 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

最后一段是神来之笔。

我也喜欢最后一段，很可爱的盗盗的样子
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梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-02-02 21:12:06 Post subject: 咕咚！

红袖添乱 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

最后一段是神来之笔。

我也喜欢最后一段，很可爱的盗盗的样子

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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2009-02-02 21:18:15 Post subject: 咕咚！咕咚！

红袖添乱 wrote:

_________________
可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2009-02-04 09:00:41 Post subject:

柴扉虚掩，推与敲均可。。。酒封已启，饮与品随意。。。好诗好酒好人儿。。。 _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2009-02-04 19:04:58 Post subject:

谁开月下门？ _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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