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轻风吹我衣
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 23:03:02    Post subject: 醒(外一首) Reply with quote



你轻轻一笑
冰雪消融
浩荡的东风
染绿了
荒芜的心野 拔节出
一片青灿灿的歌

大街上花裙子为谁开放
多情的燕翅
剪裁着一个缤纷的季节





柳叶睁开朦惺的春天
热情悄悄登录大地

天空醒了
洒下欢快的泪滴
桃花醒了
绽开灿烂的笑靥

人们敞开了胸怀
心与心连网

风儿发送来南方的信息
温暖充满人间
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PostPosted: 2009-01-28 02:46:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

正面积极,有疗效
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PostPosted: 2009-01-28 15:29:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

大街上花裙子为谁开放
多情的燕翅
剪裁着一个缤纷的季节

欣赏这种清纯, 自然的风格. 问好
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轻风吹我衣
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PostPosted: 2009-02-01 13:47:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

轻风谢谢 nobody老师!谢谢白水老师!祝两位老师新年万事如意!希望能多提意见!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-02 10:40:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎新朋友,诗句清新明亮~
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PostPosted: 2009-02-04 15:52:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢明月斑斑的鼓励,还请多多指教。
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