轻风吹我衣 童生

Joined: 19 Aug 2008 Posts: 47 Location: 中国河北 轻风吹我衣Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-27 23:03:02 Post subject: 醒(外一首) |
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春
你轻轻一笑
冰雪消融
浩荡的东风
染绿了
荒芜的心野 拔节出
一片青灿灿的歌
大街上花裙子为谁开放
多情的燕翅
剪裁着一个缤纷的季节
醒
柳叶睁开朦惺的春天
热情悄悄登录大地
天空醒了
洒下欢快的泪滴
桃花醒了
绽开灿烂的笑靥
人们敞开了胸怀
心与心连网
风儿发送来南方的信息
温暖充满人间 _________________ 掸去世事纷纭 只想以纤纤心丝 织平一方世界
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2009-01-28 02:46:29 Post subject: |
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正面积极,有疗效 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-28 15:29:56 Post subject: |
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大街上花裙子为谁开放
多情的燕翅
剪裁着一个缤纷的季节
欣赏这种清纯, 自然的风格. 问好 |
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轻风吹我衣 童生

Joined: 19 Aug 2008 Posts: 47 Location: 中国河北 轻风吹我衣Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-01 13:47:13 Post subject: |
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轻风谢谢 nobody老师!谢谢白水老师!祝两位老师新年万事如意!希望能多提意见! _________________ 掸去世事纷纭 只想以纤纤心丝 织平一方世界
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2009-02-02 10:40:19 Post subject: |
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欢迎新朋友,诗句清新明亮~ |
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轻风吹我衣 童生

Joined: 19 Aug 2008 Posts: 47 Location: 中国河北 轻风吹我衣Collection |
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