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白水
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Posted: 2009-01-25 06:36:50 Post subject:

冰清, 猜想特想中国的鞭炮和大餐.对吗? http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=19898 这是我今早的真实记录

白水
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Posted: 2009-01-27 14:32:25 Post subject:

野航路上(又题:移民路上 ) 葡萄美酒二锅头, 秀才醉笔话新牛犄角胜磨十年剑, 挑张萱纸泻乡愁临屏一游野航原玉: 戏和秋叶兄一首一年一年又一年,过了去年是今年十年磨剑剑犹钝,半生谋事事难全商海不通厚黑学,诗人唯喜老白干且将秃笔蘸焦墨,画些竹石度岁寒我没有说它是七律哦.

白水
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Posted: 2009-01-27 14:35:42 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

山城子 wrote:

牛年牛气底韵足
青牛蹄疾诗频出
白水云海观天地
问讯风雅谁最殊

谢谢老师, 草和, 见笑

七绝<和山城子>

风雅秀才不远足, 山城古韵落矶珠
屏前一览凡间事, 击键轻吟天下殊
...

孬不好
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Posted: 2009-01-27 17:12:20 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

葡萄美酒二锅头, 秀才醉笔话新牛
犄角胜磨十年剑, 挑张萱纸泻乡愁

七绝步韵奉和

凤翅青葱拌蜇头，驴唇猪手品肥牛。
情关事往劳书剑，频动壮游乡字愁。

Laughing

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白水
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Posted: 2009-01-27 18:13:08 Post subject:

孬不好 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

葡萄美酒二锅头, 秀才醉笔话新牛
犄角胜磨十年剑, 挑张萱纸泻乡愁

七绝步韵奉和

凤翅青葱拌蜇头，驴唇猪手品肥牛。
情关事往劳书剑，频动壮游乡字愁。

...

你们就这样过春节吗? Cool

白水
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Posted: 2009-01-27 18:13:28 Post subject:

他乡客 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

牛年牛气观底韵
青牛蹄疾若飞舟
晓松云海观天地
他乡问客谁最牛

他乡问客谁最牛
北美枫网占鳌头
腊雪红梅新春夜
添词赋诗展画轴
...

七绝<和他乡客>
曲赋诗词展画轴, 他乡墨客驾神舟
金牛踏浪降股海, 乱世英雄傲诸侯

孬不好
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Posted: 2009-01-27 19:47:14 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

你们就这样过春节吗? Cool

山溪为毂岭为轴，扯片轻云摆作舟。
最是痴情庭院里，张弓搭箭射鸡侯。

Laughing

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白水
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Posted: 2009-02-01 06:48:45 Post subject:

孬孬好和

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-02-01 07:03:33 Post subject:

"秀才醉笔话新牛",活灵活现,白水佳句! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-01 17:23:55 Post subject:

谢谢白云鼓励. 这是那天临屏敲的, 我就爱闹着玩, 见笑了

王君明
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Posted: 2009-02-01 23:59:30 Post subject:

拜望！新春快乐！白水先生主帖当得暇细细品味，大家云集则气象万千也。容日后重临，拜赏研习。 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-02 13:27:40 Post subject:

问好王老师, 几个月前给您发过一个短讯, 您一直没打开, 我就删掉了. 不知您现在能否打得开短讯, 盼告知.

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Posted: 2009-02-02 16:15:19 Post subject:

认真学习欣赏了，受益。白水兄，文友交往，千万别以老师相称，末学担当不起。给兄回了短信，请查看 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-03 03:54:22 Post subject:

谢谢王君明, 已回. 问好

王君明
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Posted: 2009-02-03 05:31:16 Post subject:

呵呵，看到了，握手！ _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

白水
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Posted: 2009-03-11 11:47:53 Post subject:

七绝《枫林三月》又沐枫林三月风, 痴男怨女赋桃红. 江南何必邀才子，天下文章一字通

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Posted: 2009-03-12 18:36:29 Post subject:

时光一事无成数几秋，乡音已远梦离愁。光阴既去无回路，海不扬波亦自流。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

白水
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Posted: 2009-03-13 14:16:30 Post subject:

是有缘 wrote:

时光

一事无成数几秋，乡音已远梦离愁。
光阴既去无回路，海不扬波亦自流。
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...

怎么这么悲观呢？愿你一切都好，周末愉快。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-03-14 06:24:17 Post subject:

[quote="白水 Moonlight"]七绝《枫林三月》 ...[/quote] 接口依韵和诗一首: 天下文章一字通 , 诗词歌赋尽其中 . 文人墨客枫林荟 , 万紫千红满苑丰 . _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-03-14 06:24:37 Post subject:

问好白水! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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