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[原创]我的情人
梁翼
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PostPosted: 2007-02-22 22:01:38    Post subject: [原创]我的情人 Reply with quote

[原创]我的情人

诗/梦君诗画两翼



透过生活
不是在心中
而是在脑海中
若隐若现梦中人
一辈子难忘的情人
2007年2月22日
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和平岛
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PostPosted: 2007-02-22 22:50:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

一辈子难忘的情人:
这句话, 如果能奇特一点, 会更好
Very Happy
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梁翼
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PostPosted: 2007-02-22 23:01:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢批阅,问好
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PostPosted: 2007-02-23 18:18:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

可以写的更开阔些
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