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七绝 秋思(和庆宏老师七绝 秋思)
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PostPosted: 2009-01-25 23:56:38    Post subject: 七绝 秋思(和庆宏老师七绝 秋思) Reply with quote

给各位诗友问好,请指教!

七绝 秋思

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暮色苍茫海近天,清风逐浪水涟涟。
梅沙远望波涛涌,君在他乡梦可甜?
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PostPosted: 2009-01-26 19:26:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

把你的诗一路看下来,很是受益.流畅自如。白话入诗,却也是情真如此。很好。
但很多时候,随性可以,却不可随手,如果把字句再炼炼会更精彩.
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 08:46:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

暗香如沁 wrote:
把你的诗一路看下来,很是受益.流畅自如。白话入诗,却也是情真如此。很好。
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非常感谢您的赏阅雅评!谢谢您的指教!希望向您多多学习!还望借您的慧眼雅正!
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