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相思累之梅与雪

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2009-01-25 23:04:07 Post subject: 相思累之梅与雪

临江仙.相思累之雪寻梅一夜寒霜欺我老，因谁瘦了颜容？只将白衣借西风，悄然载梦去，漫舞乱花丛。昔日梅魂今可在？望穿烟色迷蒙。此间心事与谁同，犹惊花影换，不是旧相逢。鹧鸪天.相思累之梅盼雪明月照心雪不归，依稀梅影独徘徊。痴时未计风霜苦，恨处难题花梦悲。香渐老，叶悄飞，情丝万劫化成灰。三生石上三生誓：不入红尘不作梅。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2009-01-25 23:06:20 Post subject:

如沁妹妹近来可好,挂念 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2009-01-26 02:46:33 Post subject:

雪寻梅,梅盼雪.相思何其累! 全词幽婉.欣赏. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2009-01-26 08:14:19 Post subject:

凄美感人愿你快乐

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Posted: 2009-01-26 08:24:48 Post subject:

好久不见，暗香近来可好？

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Posted: 2009-01-26 13:15:33 Post subject:

"昔日梅魂今何在?""依稀梅影独徘徊".感情丰富,既缠绵忧怨,凄美依盼!暗香好词! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-01-26 18:15:32 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

如沁妹妹近来可好,挂念

谢谢哥哥牵挂.就那样吧.

祝新春快乐.
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Posted: 2009-01-26 18:16:25 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

雪寻梅,梅盼雪.相思何其累!

全词幽婉.欣赏.

世间事,惟"情"苦.

新春快乐.
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Posted: 2009-01-26 18:17:08 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

凄美感人
愿你快乐

谢谢.祝福
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Posted: 2009-01-26 18:17:55 Post subject: .

qinghongh wrote:

好久不见，暗香近来可好？

好久不见。问好。
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Posted: 2009-01-26 18:18:50 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

"昔日梅魂今何在?""依稀梅影独徘徊".感情丰富,既缠绵忧怨,凄美依盼!暗香好词!

问好白云。您多指教.祝新春好。
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Posted: 2009-01-26 19:39:46 Post subject:

香渐老，叶悄飞，情丝万劫化成灰。三生石上三生誓：不入红尘不作梅。暗香凄美，节日还需快乐。问候并致新春祝福！

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Posted: 2009-02-04 18:56:02 Post subject:

梅雪一分谁望春？ _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2009-02-05 07:59:29 Post subject:

庭前一树梅，寒多未觉开。祗言花似雪，不悟有香来。（苏子卿《梅花落词》）如沁，读你的词，总有清风和着暗香，让我们舍不得离去！

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