蠢读斋主人 童生
Joined: 14 Dec 2008 Posts: 26
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Posted: 2009-01-25 23:07:10 Post subject: 神龙架之行<三> |
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屈原祠寄慨
云压秭归雨纷纷,向天长吟一诗人.
荆骚文开汉大赋,天问篇留路漫珍.
不改直节斗奸佞,益伤孤忠惦楚君.
郢破怀沙赴汨罗,肠断古今好知音.
观红坪三十六峰
小径穿林旷无人,岭上遍生自由花.
三十六峰妖娆尽,新得织女初赠纱.
会仙桥观云
会仙桥上会仙路,雾诡云谲变幻多.
古柏连云三千里,奇峰更在云海涡. |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-26 02:28:27 Post subject: |
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喜欢第三首<会仙桥观云>.写得很有气势.
"老来更觉诗律细".这是老杜写诗的深切体会.对我们也很有启示.
让我们共勉吧! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-26 08:13:12 Post subject: |
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浑宏大气, 喜欢
问好新年 |
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蠢读斋主人 童生
Joined: 14 Dec 2008 Posts: 26
蠢读斋主人Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-28 01:54:47 Post subject: |
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谢谢暗香如沁,黄洋界,白水评读.
祝暗香如沁,黄洋界,白水春节好! |
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