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2009 春联三对
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PostPosted: 2009-01-25 09:13:29    Post subject: 2009 春联三对 Reply with quote

今天已经是岁末了,下面草上几联,祝各位 Happy 牛 Year!


2009文艺沙龙晚会春联
送银鼠 劝龙友东奔西走暂且歇步
迎金牛 携亲朋北往南来共同举杯


几番次迭 加国冰霜袭临再辞旧岁
八载年华 诗坛风雨洗涤又历新春


乱云飞渡 鼠岁将尽荆棘路
旭日升临 牛年即来艳阳天
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PostPosted: 2009-01-25 17:31:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜读秋叶好春联.给秋叶拜年!

第三联的"鼠谁"恐为"鼠岁"之误.
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PostPosted: 2009-01-25 18:04:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

又厉新春 ?
历的笔误?

问好
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PostPosted: 2009-01-25 23:00:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

我不会对联.只能学习.
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PostPosted: 2009-01-26 09:42:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
喜读秋叶好春联.给秋叶拜年!
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谢谢黄老师慧眼,匆忙中打错了,应该是“鼠岁将尽荆途路”,谢谢。也给黄老师拜年了。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-26 09:48:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
又厉新春 ?
历的笔误?

问好


谢谢白水兄指正,昨天是为了准备大餐,匆匆打的字,现改了几处。


2009文艺沙龙晚会春联
送银鼠 劝龙友东奔西走暂且歇步
迎金牛 携亲朋北往南来共同举杯



几番次迭 加国冰霜袭临再辞旧岁
八载年华 诗坛风雨洗涤又历新春



乱云飞渡 鼠谁将尽荆棘路
旭日升临 牛年即来艳阳天
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PostPosted: 2009-01-26 13:25:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

"诗坛风雨洗涤又历新春"."牛年即来艳阳天". 秋叶励志春联.好!!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 10:17:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
今天已经是岁末了,下面草上几联,祝各位 Happy 牛 Year!
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给秋叶老师及各位诗友拜年!祝福新春快乐!牛年吉祥如意!
仔细看了看您的春联,好难对哟,太有难度、太有水准了!不过呢,为了向您多学习一些对春联及格律诗的知识,lulu准备豁出去了,还是要试一下!还望秋叶老师雅正并指教!您一定要认真批改作业哟!

春联三对

(一)
几度光阴,北国冰雪侵袭再别往昔
数载冬夏,南疆风雨洗礼又临新春

(二)
坚冰覆盖,银鼠即别严寒日
光明来临,金牛将至太平年

(三)
辞旧岁,呼好友四面八方稍作停留
迎新春,约亲朋天南地北一同庆贺
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PostPosted: 2009-01-29 04:43:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
今天已经是岁末了,下面草上几联,祝各位 Happy 牛 Year!
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谢秋叶老师指点!谢您一直以来在格律上给予lulu的启蒙,给师问好!
现把您更正的地方略作修改,请您赐教!并欢迎您常来“修理”!

(一)
几度光阴,北国严寒侵扰再别往昔
数年冬夏,南疆风雨洗礼又临新春

(二)
残雪覆盖,银鼠即别严寒日
光明来临,金牛将至太平年

(三)
辞旧岁,呼好友四面八方稍作休息
迎新春,约亲朋天南地北一同贺年

Another thing, I want to consult you, there should be some level and oblique tones requirements on couplet, lulu is so crass, don’t understand it, if you’re convenient, would you please teach me? Thanks a lot!
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