William Zhou周道模 探花
Joined: 10 Jun 2007 Posts: 3950 Location: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-11 14:56:42 Post subject: [汉英微型诗] 三片树叶(发重了,请删去} |
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三片树叶
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黄叶说落叶:完了
青叶说黄叶:你也快了
说着,青叶开始发黄了
Three Leaves of the Tree
Yellow leaf tells the falling one, going down so low
Green leaf tells the yellow one, soon you'll follow
While saying that, the green one is turning yellow _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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kino 秀才
Joined: 23 Dec 2006 Posts: 411 Location: beijing kinoCollection |
Posted: 2009-01-15 02:57:36 Post subject: |
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黄叶说落叶:完了
青叶说黄叶:你也快了
说着,青叶开始发黄了
仿佛读过感觉类似的
中文和英文都可以更简洁些 |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
Joined: 10 Jun 2007 Posts: 3950 Location: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-15 14:53:38 Post subject: |
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请问谁写过类似的诗,能否贴出来学习?
我写的时候是原创。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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William Zhou周道模 探花
Joined: 10 Jun 2007 Posts: 3950 Location: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-15 14:55:58 Post subject: |
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哦! 发重了,请版主删掉后面这个。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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kino 秀才
Joined: 23 Dec 2006 Posts: 411 Location: beijing kinoCollection |
Posted: 2009-01-16 00:39:27 Post subject: |
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忘记了,只是说那种白驹过隙的感觉,不是说内容。 |
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Lake 举人

Joined: 09 Jan 2007 Posts: 1286
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Posted: 2009-01-21 16:11:07 Post subject: |
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Kino, 给简洁个看看,学习学习。  _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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