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[汉英微型诗] 三片树叶(发重了,请删去}
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PostPosted: 2009-01-11 14:56:42    Post subject: [汉英微型诗] 三片树叶(发重了,请删去} Reply with quote

三片树叶

周 道 模

黄叶说落叶:完了

青叶说黄叶:你也快了

说着,青叶开始发黄了

Three Leaves of the Tree

Yellow leaf tells the falling one, going down so low

Green leaf tells the yellow one, soon you'll follow

While saying that, the green one is turning yellow
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PostPosted: 2009-01-15 02:57:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄叶说落叶:完了

青叶说黄叶:你也快了

说着,青叶开始发黄了


仿佛读过感觉类似的

中文和英文都可以更简洁些
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PostPosted: 2009-01-15 14:53:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

请问谁写过类似的诗,能否贴出来学习?

我写的时候是原创。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-15 14:55:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

哦! 发重了,请版主删掉后面这个。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-16 00:39:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

忘记了,只是说那种白驹过隙的感觉,不是说内容。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-21 16:11:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

kino wrote:
中文和英文都可以更简洁些


Kino, 给简洁个看看,学习学习。 Smile
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