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柿子
秀才


Joined: 25 Sep 2007
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Location: 中国河南商丘职业技术学院大一
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PostPosted: 2009-01-19 06:44:30    Post subject: <<流年>> Reply with quote

竹下的寺庙
你回头看看
好吗?


天上的流星
你抬头望望
好吗?


竹可以长青
庙可以长空
星却无法暂停


香荡在竹间
泪流在天上
你背走了夕阳



竹花葬庙
星泪消散
又是一天,又是一年
只是,少了一点
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沙漠
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Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
沙漠Collection
PostPosted: 2009-01-19 22:01:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

纯净。个人觉得结尾韵味弱了些。
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2009-02-01 22:57:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

好久没来了,顶一次。
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