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梦外江南

悠子
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Posted: 2008-12-31 06:54:27 Post subject: 梦外江南

几缕微绿的轻风就足以掀起千层的春意和一波难收的乡愁柳丝依然撩人桃红间，偶尔掠过别人的传说花盛开了一回又一回记忆却渐渐荒芜风不解语烟雨不识愁滋味浅浅看，又春光明媚以为可以离开以为可以遥望以为可以温柔地等你。。。梦外的江南没有雾锁杨柳岸也没有，唐朝那把油纸伞 12/31/2008

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2009-01-02 00:57:35 Post subject:

微绿的轻风几缕就足以掀起千层的春意和一波波难收的乡愁柳丝撩人，桃红间偶尔掠过别人的传说梦外的江南没有雾锁杨柳岸没有，唐朝那把油纸伞 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

是有缘
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Posted: 2009-01-04 16:54:48 Post subject:

确实需要唐代的人和衣，才能配合这样的景。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

悠子
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Posted: 2009-01-05 07:23:30 Post subject: 哈，这就是开始的两段，你怎知道？？？

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

微绿的轻风几缕
...

好不容易填进去的，又被你无情地删掉~~

悠子
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Posted: 2009-01-05 07:24:49 Post subject: 那不可以~~~我没有糖衣咋办？

是有缘 wrote:

确实需要唐代的人和衣，才能配合这样的景。

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2009-01-05 08:42:10 Post subject: 梦里看到的～

悠子 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

微绿的轻风几缕
...

好不容易填进去的，又被你无情地删掉~~

没删哪！没有更动的就空着呗。
_________________
可情可理，去捧就真

悠子
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Posted: 2009-01-05 09:40:33 Post subject: 你做的是哪门子梦来着?

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

没删哪！没有更动的就空着呗。

现在写东东也不斟词酌句了，好像是为了对付你，哈

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Posted: 2009-01-07 19:42:30 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

是有缘 wrote:

确实需要唐代的人和衣，才能配合这样的景。

明儿给你制一件用火箭发给你。

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2009-01-10 20:31:52 Post subject:

很风动杨柳的季节。梦里梦外都是你 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-01-13 04:49:23 Post subject:

画面好像是杭州西湖。没有那么美吧，柳树那个丝太长了，倒没见过我还在西湖洗了我一双臭脚，当时夏天很热，水很清凉，唯一的回忆~` _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2009-01-14 18:30:40 Post subject:

可以借用一下唐朝那把油纸伞么？ _________________ 瞠目结舌

飞狐
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Posted: 2009-01-16 14:34:35 Post subject:

让我想家,想念苏堤!

博弈
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Posted: 2009-01-16 22:18:07 Post subject:

真是那麼綠哦, 綠的可以成專有名詞, 就叫它蘇堤綠吧. 要是柏油路換成青石面就好了. _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

悠子
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Posted: 2009-01-19 16:02:43 Post subject: 罚你不准来杭州

伤城 wrote:

画面好像是杭州西湖。没有那么美吧，柳树那个丝太长了，倒没见过
...

悠子
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Posted: 2009-01-19 16:03:28 Post subject: 你问谁呢

拈花微笑 wrote:

可以借用一下唐朝那把油纸伞么？

悠子
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Posted: 2009-01-19 16:04:16 Post subject: 哈，谁让你跑来着~

飞狐 wrote:

让我想家,想念苏堤!

悠子
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Posted: 2009-01-19 16:05:49 Post subject: 蘇堤綠, 喜欢哪。那图，偷懒没有把下面的路剪掉

博弈 wrote:

真是那麼綠哦, 綠的可以成專有名詞, 就叫它蘇堤綠吧.
...

骨笛
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Posted: 2009-01-19 18:21:48 Post subject:

美景，文中丝丝的愁。 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

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