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悠子哪？

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2009-01-17 08:44:59 Post subject: 悠子哪？

你昨夜有梦吗？如果有梦是不是梦见那条小河和蜿蜒的轻烟？我就是那轻烟在寒风吹散我的魂魄之前不舍地缭绕在你身边深情无限今夜你还会有梦吗？如果有梦能不能再约你见个面？我想做一尾不流泪的鱼还在昨夜梦中那条小河和你一起逐梦在河面上跳圈圈还要约明天，我是小河潺潺以时间的绿水洗亮你凌波的笑眼还要约。，，还要约。。。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-01-17 12:20:17 Post subject:

轻烟才对！我是神灯。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2009-01-17 17:28:39 Post subject: 哈，嗯，不好意思，这是直接往上写的。没打底稿

主要是怕写个空贴问候，哈哈~~被你删了咋办？钙了改，还加了两段~~~：））） _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-01-18 13:24:39 Post subject: 活到这把年纪！好像还没删过别人的贴子～

红袖添乱 wrote:

主要是怕写个空贴问候，哈哈~~被你删了咋办？
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就有也是被动，没劲啊！
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Posted: 2009-01-18 13:27:08 Post subject: 死缠烂打好

还要约。。。还要约。。。死缠烂打这是！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2009-01-19 07:43:00 Post subject:

奇怪，我是去跟铁的，好像却改了贴~~晕！ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-01-19 11:36:38 Post subject: 悠子哪？悠子哪～别跑题。

红袖添乱 wrote:

奇怪，我是去跟铁的，好像却改了贴~~晕！

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Posted: 2009-01-19 15:59:03 Post subject:

这个，题目要改

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Posted: 2009-01-19 16:00:58 Post subject: 悠子没跑，只能跑题

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

红袖添乱 wrote:

奇怪，我是去跟铁的，好像却改了贴~~晕！

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Posted: 2009-01-19 18:16:33 Post subject:

深情无限 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

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Posted: 2009-01-19 19:47:08 Post subject:

不知道改沙题目~~赖着！ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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