沐诗雨
童生
Joined: 21 Oct 2007
Posts: 15
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 Posted: 2009-01-17 02:58:38 Post subject: 花瓣雨 |
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花瓣雨（七绝三首)
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花雨朦胧醒木伤，
凄风盈袖带幽芳。
香消玉损归尘土，
秀韵空灵入乐章。
二
飞花影绰冷风重，
占断韶华掩谷空。
幽婉三分愁雨洗，
孤芳一缕郁尘中。
三
残瓣飘零四海间，
铅华淡尽一生缘。
冰心不意浮尘掩，
玉骨凝诗逸梦田。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2009-01-17 20:44:23 Post subject: |
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秀韵花瓣雨,空灵入乐章.写得轻盈流畅.欣赏.
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2009-01-18 04:18:36 Post subject: |
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| 婉约十足！ |
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连南河
秀才
Joined: 30 Aug 2008
Posts: 342
Location: Toronto
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| Posted: 2009-01-18 07:32:01 Post subject: |
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花瓣流雨
空灵飞诗
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一路雨丝一路风 |
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