bannong
童生
Joined: 16 Jul 2007
Posts: 44
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 Posted: 2009-01-14 16:15:24 Post subject: 咏物几个 |
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咏物几个
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天女牵丝织素巾，拭残冰月遗凡尘。 或为西陆伤离恨，片片阴沉带泪频。
钉子
铁骨曾烧淬，无声力固撑。 皆云其物好，谁念寸身功？（新韵）
火柴
方直原朴质，绮梦待霜匣。 冷世缘谁力？艳燃一朵花。 （新韵）
橘
淮南产红橘，瓣瓣玉晶莹。君可多尝食，甜酸似爱情。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2009-01-14 16:43:33 Post subject: |
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咏物而不直言其物,得其精神.好!
尤喜第一首.问好!
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2009-01-14 17:19:08 Post subject: |
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| 黄老师也是咏物高手，正对口味。风格很相近啊！ |
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bannong
童生
Joined: 16 Jul 2007
Posts: 44
bannongCollection |
| Posted: 2009-01-15 15:29:08 Post subject: |
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| 多谢评赏！问好二位老师！ |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
| Posted: 2009-01-16 16:06:22 Post subject: |
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| 咏物，言之有物，想象丰富~ |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection |
| Posted: 2009-01-16 16:52:19 Post subject: |
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| 咏物寓意, 不错 |
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