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PostPosted: 2009-01-15 12:17:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
孬不好 wrote:
秋叶 wrote:
七律－回望2008

风雪兼程渡岁关， 人生栈道越艰难。
商场碌碌谋柴米， 网络频频搜论坛。
股债金融颓势猛， 楼房价格跌声寒。。
庭前见惯花开落， 世道折腾迎鹤还。

碌，跌，折―入声
折腾－时髦用语，



七律 步韵奉和
...


哈哈，高！ 谢谢和作。 下面附上我的一首旧作，第一句用千古名句“烟锁池塘柳”，句中包含“金木水火土”， 我开始对“诗铭枫火流”，后就干脆写成五绝了。

文字游戏，抛砖引玉Laughing 。

五绝－故国春秋并试对名句

烟锁池塘柳， 诗铭枫火流，
天涯孤雁远， 故国最春秋。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-16 14:12:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
准确生动地概括了2008，欣赏楼主好作！
问好先生！
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PostPosted: 2009-01-20 09:32:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
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准确生动地概括了2008，欣赏楼主好作！
问好先生！


谢谢南之北赏读，祝新年快乐！
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PostPosted: 2009-01-21 15:32:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
秋叶兄这一组在许多佳句可赏,愧无才以和.
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PostPosted: 2009-01-21 19:01:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
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秋叶兄这一组在许多佳句可赏,愧无才以和.


谢谢野航兄， 过奖了，敝作语句浅白，有病呻吟而已，岂及您之万一。 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 04:40:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
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征下联
诗坛高手，多才才女急才至


帅帐军师，大智智人随智来


Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 16:04:58    Post subject: Reply with quote
呵呵, 也来凑凑热闹:

秋叶 wrote:

征下联
诗坛高手，多才才女急才至


网络老生，嗜酒酒仙唤酒来
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 17:36:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
WOW, 好对多多 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 19:12:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
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呵呵, 也来凑凑热闹:

秋叶 wrote:

征下联
诗坛高手，多才才女急才至


网络老生，嗜酒酒仙唤酒来


好工对，谢谢。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 19:18:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
孬不好 wrote:
秋叶 wrote:

征下联
诗坛高手，多才才女急才至


帅帐军师，大智智人随智来
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“高手”对“军师” Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 19:20:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
WOW, 好对多多 Very Happy

白水兄，您的呢？

Happy 牛 Year!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 20:03:42    Post subject: Reply with quote
秋叶 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
WOW, 好对多多 Very Happy

白水兄，您的呢？

Happy 牛 Year!


秋叶兄，Happy 牛 Year! 的创意太高了！
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 22:25:33    Post subject: Reply with quote
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“高手”对“军师” Laughing



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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 22:29:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
出句1：鼠目寸光难逐日

出句2：小儿好学成天问

出句3：黄河唱响黄河颂


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PostPosted: 2009-01-23 19:22:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
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出句1：鼠目寸光难逐日

出句2：小儿好学成天问

出句3：黄河唱响黄河颂


这些出句都有难度, 而且还有机关在里头, 对两个试试.

小儿好学成天问
夫子聊赖念水经

黄河唱响黄河颂
赤县翻为赤县天
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PostPosted: 2009-01-25 05:12:00    Post subject: 七律 回望 Reply with quote
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前二年都有诗回望过，今年也不好例外，草上一首望斧正：
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和秋叶老师 七律 回望 2008

七律 回望

书山磨砺阅冬夏，师海耕耘品苦甜。
晨望树苗竟伟岸，暮观花朵舞翩跹。
常闻袅袅思乡曲，又伴悠悠吟赋篇。
且看今朝孤对影，不知何日共婵娟？

祝您牛年：
所有的希望都能如愿；
所有的梦想都能实现；
所有的等候都能出现；
所有的付出都能兑现！
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PostPosted: 2009-01-25 06:51:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
七律－回 望

商海浮沉又一年，　风狂浪骤过深渊。
久无雅兴敲新句，　暂有残诗和众贤。
对镜频频凝鬓色，　驱车疾疾越山川。
为谋生计添烦苦，　回首瞻前更失眠。


再赏这一首,颇为感动
就此动笔,想到哪儿写到哪:

一年一年又一年,过了去年是今年
十年磨剑剑犹钝,半生谋事事难全
商海不通厚黑学,诗人唯喜老白干
且将秃笔蘸焦墨,画些竹石度岁寒

我没有说它是七律哦.
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PostPosted: 2009-01-25 08:40:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
秋叶诗作得好，野行兄和得妙。商海莫测，岁月无情。但是大家都还是有心人。诗照作，酒照喝。我也油一首，凑个乐。

金融逢海啸，
商贾叹赔钱。
冬寒盼春绿，
股市爱牛年！

祝大家，Happy 牛 Year! Razz
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PostPosted: 2009-01-25 09:19:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
lulu wrote:
秋叶 wrote:
前二年都有诗回望过，今年也不好例外，草上一首望斧正：
...

和秋叶老师 七律 回望 2008
...


谢谢lulu，和得好！欢迎光临串门clamping
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PostPosted: 2009-01-25 09:23:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
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谢谢野航兄，和作比敝作更动人啊 Laughing
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