zmj166
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 Posted: 2009-01-13 22:16:52 Post subject: 【紫木槿诗歌】你与我 |
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你与我
⊙紫木槿
你是珍珠
我就是那觅珠人
你从蚌中吐出来
吐出前流过无数的泪珠
泪珠一滴滴结晶
成为现在可爱晶莹的珍珠
你知道充分的给予是幸福
永久苦苦的沉埋是痛苦
你的光
从不在不适当的时候闪露
你在等待
我这苦爱珍珠的唯一的觅珠人
带着满腔热望和真情
正从一个固定的方向
向你走来
你欣喜若狂
投入我这滚烫的胸怀
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2009-01-15 19:17:55 Post subject: |
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| 意向不错, 喜欢. 文字似可稍敛? 问好 |
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zmj166
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| Posted: 2009-01-22 05:21:47 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
| 意向不错, 喜欢. 文字似可稍敛? 问好 |
谢谢来评。 |
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韩少君
进士出身
Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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| Posted: 2009-01-22 20:11:14 Post subject: |
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马莲花！问好！
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靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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zmj166
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| Posted: 2009-01-27 20:21:39 Post subject: |
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我是紫木槿。 |
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zmj166
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| Posted: 2009-05-16 16:31:26 Post subject: |
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你是珍珠
我就是那觅珠人 |
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