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PostPosted: 2008-12-04 21:55:52    Post subject: 游九寨沟 Reply with quote

近日甚忙,昨无眠草就一首,先请方家赐教,有空拜读各位大作。

游九寨沟

九寨秋临绣卷开, 黄红紫绿巧编裁。
珍珠飞白悬崖瀑, 长海涂蓝绝世埃。
歌舞烟岚萦藏舍, 湖滩盆景发青苔。
如诗仙地难寻觅, 犹是梦中方醒来。

白, 发-入声
珍珠滩瀑布,长海,盆景滩和藏族 村寨是九寨沟其中的景点。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-05 02:04:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶游川,昨夜无眠,如诗仙境,梦中醒来.

见诗如面,问好!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-05 07:04:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

重 重 画 卷 开 ,
仙 景 远 尘 埃 .
畅 意 游 川 作 ,
缤 纷 妙 笔 来 .

问好秋叶!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-05 08:58:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋兄好七律,以两首旧作和。

五律 游九寨沟

九寨景清幽,人来画内游。
绿荫消盛夏,碧水浸初秋。
泉喜珍珠跃,林深异兽悠。
风光藏世外,但愿净心留。


(注:九寨沟有珍珠滩,流水腾若珍珠。异兽:大熊猫。)

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五绝 镜海

仙姑遗宝镜,化做镜湖奇。
满目春秋色,全为碧海吸。

(注:九寨沟的镜海(湖)传说是天上仙女所遗宝镜所化而成,湖水清澈,映照山影。)
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PostPosted: 2008-12-05 18:50:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶秋游九寨沟,一枝一叶总清幽

问好!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-05 21:18:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
秋叶游川,昨夜无眠,如诗仙境,梦中醒来.

见诗如面,问好!


谢谢赠玉,问好老师,别来无恙,待看新诗。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-05 21:36:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
重 重 画 卷 开 ,
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白 云 舒 卷 开 ,
洗 尽 世 尘 埃 。
翘 首 登 高 望,
闲 人驾 鹤 来。

谢谢白云兄, 次韵和一首。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-05 21:39:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
秋兄好七律,以两首旧作和。
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谢谢庆宏兄,和得妙,听说大熊猫在老虎海对面山林出没,镜海有上,中,下,水都很蓝,是没有污染的缘故。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-05 21:53:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

野航 wrote:
秋叶秋游九寨沟,一枝一叶总清幽

问好!


野航远渡可将渡? 万里长风一路平。

谢谢!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-08 10:31:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

结句情余言外,妙极!

问好秋斑。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-08 19:31:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

难得。前年也曾游,时未留片字,后欲追,终不能得。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-10 13:19:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶? 怎么和我的名字这么象 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-12-10 16:14:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

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秋叶? 怎么和我的名字这么象 Laughing


秋叶秋香,一路芬芳。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-12 15:55:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
结句情余言外,妙极!

问好秋斑。


谢谢冰清老师赏读,近来安好!
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PostPosted: 2008-12-12 15:56:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

是有缘 wrote:
难得。前年也曾游,时未留片字,后欲追,终不能得。


有空补上,待看大作。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-12 16:03:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋香 wrote:
秋叶? 怎么和我的名字这么象 Laughing


秋香秋叶何相类?已知秋香是谁人。 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-12-23 23:51:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

歪不正 wrote:
分身乏术脱无开,九寨风光梦里裁。
叠障飞崖垂白水,滩涂泊海杜黄埃。
浮屠澹入游人趣,爽气漫侵晓露苔。
笑向沧溟问今古,谁知仙子可曾来?


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PostPosted: 2008-12-24 11:59:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

征尘载袖 wrote:
歪不正 wrote:
分身乏术脱无开,九寨风光梦里裁。
叠障飞崖垂白水,滩涂泊海杜黄埃。
浮屠澹入游人趣,爽气漫侵晓露苔。
笑向沧溟问今古,谁知仙子可曾来?


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Y 兄可真是急材,没到过九寨沟比我去过的写得还妙,非凡想象力, 谢谢和作。
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PostPosted: 2008-12-24 16:14:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋香秋叶美人栽,
一路芬芳九寨来.
驾鹤闲人抬首望,
白云深处卷帘开.
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PostPosted: 2008-12-24 16:45:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶秋临九寨沟, 湖光山色一望收. 真令人羡慕! 问诗兄好!。
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