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我也来一个《静中的莲》
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PostPosted: 2007-02-01 00:15:38    Post subject: 我也来一个《静中的莲》 Reply with quote

《静中的莲》

静中的莲,独坐在语言的深处
看内心阳光的花瓣旋转
她面前的一池春水,我们的缘
被我倾诉的风吹皱后又起波澜。

水天一色中,翠绿的我
环顾苍穹一样,环顾了莲
目光触及的词语,莲的范畴
似乎总与爱情有关,与我有关。

莲,开在我笔上的灯盏
她体内清香四溢的宁静
足以震慑,我体内的骚动和不安。

水中,最大的幸福
就是做离她最近的那一擎翠绿的荷叶
风中仰面,随时可见她红红的脸。

水中的我,听见经过体内的水缠绵不断。

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PostPosted: 2007-02-01 00:18:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

了因大兄的诗歌
读了让人赞叹不已

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学习了
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PostPosted: 2007-02-01 00:21:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好,hepingdao。

你过奖了,多批多指点。
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莲,开在我笔上的灯盏
她体内清香四溢的宁静
足以震慑,我体内的骚动和不安。
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问好!李智强

多批多指点。
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