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鹤雨
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2006-12-05 05:46:06    Post subject: 离开 Reply with quote
离开

一个想要离开的人
是无法挽留的
用尽了寻找
只能看到一个
万人空巷的背影

任泪水洗白黑夜
任思想惊醒黎明
风 依然不为你停
只留下满地落花
片片伤痕

前世我将望夫崖
站成风景
换得你今生片刻的亲近
现在你一转身
我就变成了万丈悬崖下的
一丝游魂
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2006-12-05 05:56:55    Post subject: Reply with quote
妹妹,要多保重~
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和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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PostPosted: 2006-12-05 21:57:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
我心无悔

就够了
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鹤雨
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PostPosted: 2006-12-06 02:37:55    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢各位!
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墨染红颜
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PostPosted: 2006-12-06 04:40:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
妹妹，他会回来再读你的诗歌，为他祈祷！！
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风花飞有态，烟絮坠无痕。
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PostPosted: 2006-12-06 05:03:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
最后一段极为真情，所以极精彩。
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PostPosted: 2006-12-06 08:51:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
一切尽在不言中，尽在祝福中。
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了因大兄
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PostPosted: 2006-12-06 18:17:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
真情永恒，问好。
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我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过
不能随随便便不回家
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PostPosted: 2006-12-14 04:08:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
前世我将望夫崖
站成风景
换得你今生片刻的亲近
现在你一转身
我就变成了万丈悬崖下的
一丝游魂
刻骨铭心的爱！
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黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河
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