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PostPosted: 2007-10-31 19:34:34    Post subject: 在秋天的云层里(二) Reply with quote

在秋天的云层里(二)

*秋日, 可有闪电?


待你出鞘的剑
直到
从幻梦中醒来

云海涨满潮水的浓
我 微笑着
解开缆绳
任一叶孤舟



*秋的箴言

雨在落, 叶
也在落
咸涩的雨水是你未能流尽的泪么?
猜想落叶一定
是没能写完的信了
给谁呢? 未成年的孩子 还是
牵挂你的母亲
只是
记住, 千万不要给他

*在雨中

擦肩,
再一次

回眸

朦胧的雨
飘落 又是千年

*秋水

习惯了
平凡的日子和他一起流过
温馨的小河
直到那天你陡然惊醒 发现
时光正在 剽窃
你的爱人

温柔, 是一根初生的白发
从他不再年轻的鬓角
淡淡的相思轻轻
缝合每一个挥手告别的黎明 还有
等待相拥的黄昏
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PostPosted: 2007-10-31 20:04:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

朦胧的雨
飘落 又是千年

时光好快呀
Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-10-31 20:16:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水啊,私密的事不要透露太多啊,不过,我当然高兴,收藏
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PostPosted: 2007-10-31 21:43:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
朦胧的雨
飘落 又是千年

时光好快呀
Laughing


快吗? 在来两段更快的 Wink

秋天, 那在风中摇曳的……

横笔拖过秋风
那棵树就老了 你
净身出户, 抖落的叶
在谁的左肩
烙下深深的暗红 我
忍不住

回首
推开那扇半掩的柴门
看她. 用一袭尘衣
隐身

秋聚10.28

摘一片月
点燃今晚的烛光
知了还在唱
醉在昨日的梦中

轻轻地
咬碎一颗嫩绿的葡萄
把几滴思念搅入
紫色的玉酿
一朵云儿远去了

酒醒处, 玫瑰红, 茉莉白, 龙井香
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PostPosted: 2007-10-31 21:46:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

jemmy wrote:
白水啊,私密的事不要透露太多啊,不过,我当然高兴,收藏


谢谢JEMMY. 没事, 再读几遍或许会有不同的感觉. Cool Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-10-31 21:54:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢白水的诗!!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-31 21:57:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

在秋天的云层里(二)
怎么没有看到第一呢?
问好白水~
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PostPosted: 2007-10-31 21:59:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

把几滴思念搅入
紫色的玉酿
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-11-01 00:32:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

阅!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-01 01:44:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

*在雨中

擦肩,
再一次

回眸

朦胧的雨
飘落 又是千年

好一个小令.
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PostPosted: 2007-11-01 07:15:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈,很不错的语感。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-01 15:30:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

抓的感觉不错,问候你.
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PostPosted: 2007-11-01 18:03:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

*秋日, 可有闪电?


待你出鞘的剑
直到
从幻梦中醒来

云海涨满潮水的浓
我 微笑着
解开缆绳
任一叶孤舟



欣赏!提读!!
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PostPosted: 2007-11-02 09:38:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

*秋的箴言

雨在落, 叶
也在落
咸涩的雨水是你未能流尽的泪么?
猜想落叶一定
是没能写完的信了
给谁呢? 未成年的孩子 还是
牵挂你的母亲
只是
记住, 千万不要给他




欣悦珍藏,这动容落叶的未竟之书。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-02 11:06:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
喜欢白水的诗!!
谢谢海军喜欢. 问好
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PostPosted: 2007-11-02 11:10:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
在秋天的云层里(二)
怎么没有看到第一呢?
问好白水~


问好月亮, HERE IS IT
http://oson.ca/

不好意思, 这连接又有问题了. 改天吧 Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-11-02 11:18:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
把几滴思念搅入
紫色的玉酿
Very Happy


绿葡萄解酒 Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-11-02 16:45:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
阅!


哈, 少君真是惜字如金啊. 象省长批文似的 Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-11-02 16:46:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

了因大兄 wrote:
*在雨中

擦肩,
再一次

回眸

朦胧的雨
飘落 又是千年

好一个小令.


谢谢, 问好
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PostPosted: 2007-11-02 16:48:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
哈哈,很不错的语感。

哈, 冲浪, 光语感好吗? 其实内涵更好. Razz
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