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白水
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Posted: 2012-04-14 21:49:06 Post subject: 五绝《戏鱼》

五绝《戏鱼》新柳扶清影，临池弄月圆憨鱼追响尾，空饵腹难填

白水
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Posted: 2012-04-14 21:54:11 Post subject:

昨日与诸诗（文）友聚会时，跟黄老师学作的第一幅画，留此为证，见笑

黑眼睛的苏珊
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Posted: 2012-04-15 01:04:43 Post subject:

白水好诗。我们吃饱了喝足了，却用空饵来戏鱼，人啊人！那新柳，那水中圆月倒是很有意境。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2012-04-15 01:08:08 Post subject:

“三鳞戏月”画得生动传神，题诗与画，相得益彰。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
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Posted: 2012-04-15 05:28:34 Post subject:

黑眼睛的苏珊 wrote:

白水好诗。
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的确，月影哪有韭菜盒子好吃。回家后我看着画傻乐 Laughing

还得谢谢你的安排才是，昨天玩得挺高兴的
Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2012-04-15 05:30:31 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

“三鳞戏月”画得生动传神，题诗与画，相得益彰。

黄老师，昨天辛苦你了，特感谢
我这只是戏作而已，恭候你的大作

qinghongh
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Posted: 2012-04-15 11:00:06 Post subject:

三鱼戏月，有点象一家三口嘛。

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Posted: 2012-04-15 11:50:43 Post subject:

学一首嫩柳轻腰舞池泉映月圆三鳞翔浅底婉丽美词填 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

黑眼睛的苏珊
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Posted: 2012-04-16 00:31:30 Post subject:

这幅画淡淡几笔却令人产生无限遐想：那应该是一个嫩柳新垂，池塘微碧，月明星稀的四月的夜晚。一对玉人临池戏鱼：月儿般明媚的姑娘轻轻地倚在英俊少年的肩头，低声问：“你看那鱼儿象征着什么？”，少年木讷：“看不出来”。姑娘略带羞涩：“一条是我，另一条是你。”“那第三条呢？”“你好傻，当然是我们的孩子了。”姑娘说罢脸儿绯红，月光映在姑娘脸上，越发妩媚动人，少年不由得底下头去，轻轻的一个吻印在姑娘绯红的面颊上。鱼儿摆着尾巴似是击掌。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2012-04-16 02:03:24 Post subject:

白水一幅画，引出画外许多遐想，苏珊想像力也够丰富啊! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2012-04-16 06:16:19 Post subject:

跟一首。凑热闹：明月带清风，三只锦鲤逢。轻轻浓淡画，游动有无中。

白水
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Posted: 2012-04-16 06:53:10 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

三鱼戏月，有点象一家三口嘛。 Very Happy

那中间就不是月影，而是一张餐桌，桌上还要摆好多好吃的 Razz

白水
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Posted: 2012-04-16 06:54:55 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

学一首

嫩柳轻腰舞池泉映月圆
三鳞翔浅底婉丽美词填

谢谢老师，好清丽的诗

白水
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Posted: 2012-04-16 07:05:28 Post subject:

黑眼睛的苏珊 wrote:

这幅画淡淡几笔却令人产生无限遐想：

那应该是一个嫩柳新垂，池塘微碧，月明星稀的四月的夜晚。一对玉人临池戏鱼：月儿般明媚的姑娘轻轻地倚在英俊少年的肩头，低声问：“你看那鱼儿象征着什么？”，少年木讷：“看不出来”。姑娘略带羞涩：“一条是我，另一条是你。”“那第三条呢？”“你好傻，当然是我们的孩子了。”姑娘说罢脸儿绯红，月光映在姑娘脸上，越发妩媚动人，少年不由得底下头去，轻轻的一个吻印在姑娘绯红的面颊上。鱼儿摆着尾巴似是击掌。
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好文笔，好丰富的想象力。欣赏

白水
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Posted: 2012-04-16 07:16:50 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

跟一首。凑热闹：

明月带清风，三只锦鲤逢。
轻轻浓淡画，游动有无中。
...

好诗。
临屏草和，见笑 Very Happy

花雨沐春风，友朋画苑逢
诗浓匀淡墨，小醉月明中。

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Posted: 2012-04-16 14:57:28 Post subject:

白水兄好诗，临屏和上一首：黑柳变青影，铁丝似月圆。条条皆串起，准备晒鱼干。另外大作是五言啊。

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Posted: 2012-04-16 20:48:56 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

白水兄好诗，临屏和上一首：
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哈,就是吃神,你的回望呢?
谢谢提醒,那天临屏现打着好玩,把五打成七了,已改 Razz

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Posted: 2012-04-18 11:37:54 Post subject:

一枝墨柳疑是春，三尾锦鲤巧相逢。今夕并非中秋夜，谁剪月饼戏诗人。 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2012-04-19 06:18:34 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

一枝墨柳疑是春，三尾锦鲤巧相逢。
今夕并非中秋夜，谁剪月饼戏诗人。

WOW，好文笔。
答问：是一个叫张静的大美女，把月饼一剪两半变韭菜盒子了，特好吃 Very Happy

hepingdao
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Posted: 2012-04-19 11:49:31 Post subject:

你的处女作确实空灵, 是黄老师指点有方哦 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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