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PostPosted: 2010-12-18 10:46:15    Post subject: Matin Reply with quote

Matin

Sunrise is a key
for opening the dark door
that is a long night left for me

I step into the sunlight
but find a shade laying on the snowfield
that is my shadow, sad and disappointed

it's just a shadow, but me
I am standing in the sunshine

晨歌

晨曦是一把钥匙
为我打开黑色的门
这是长夜留给我的门

我走进阳光
发现一个阴影躺在雪地上
那是我的影子, 伤感而失望

那仅仅是个影子,而真实的我
站在阳光里
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PostPosted: 2010-12-18 14:23:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sunrise is a key
for opening a door to the light for me

Stepping inside
I found myself a shadow on the snowfield
lonely and still
I felt like turning into
a sculpture
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PostPosted: 2010-12-18 16:15:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

peace, 谢谢了。
我把我想表达的意思写成中文了,你看看,再帮我改改好吗?
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PostPosted: 2010-12-18 16:30:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

looks good now
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PostPosted: 2010-12-18 17:47:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

Are you sure? Thanks a lot.
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PostPosted: 2010-12-18 18:03:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good imagination!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-19 08:18:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you very much.
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PostPosted: 2010-12-25 07:16:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

Amazing! Really good!

So beautiful a shadow!
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PostPosted: 2010-12-27 09:10:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢鼓励。问好节日
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PostPosted: 2011-01-01 18:57:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

...the dark door
that a long night left me

it's just a shadow, not the true me
who is standing in the sunshine
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PostPosted: 2011-01-02 09:35:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks for you suggestion

Happy new year
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