白水
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 Posted: 2010-12-18 10:46:15 Post subject: Matin |
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Matin
Sunrise is a key
for opening the dark door
that is a long night left for me
I step into the sunlight
but find a shade laying on the snowfield
that is my shadow, sad and disappointed
it's just a shadow, but me
I am standing in the sunshine
晨歌
晨曦是一把钥匙
为我打开黑色的门
这是长夜留给我的门
我走进阳光
发现一个阴影躺在雪地上
那是我的影子， 伤感而失望
那仅仅是个影子，而真实的我
站在阳光里 |
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2010-12-18 14:23:32 Post subject: |
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Sunrise is a key
for opening a door to the light for me
Stepping inside
I found myself a shadow on the snowfield
lonely and still
I felt like turning into
a sculpture
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白水
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| Posted: 2010-12-18 16:15:09 Post subject: |
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peace, 谢谢了。
我把我想表达的意思写成中文了，你看看，再帮我改改好吗？ |
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2010-12-18 16:30:54 Post subject: |
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looks good now
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白水
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| Posted: 2010-12-18 17:47:15 Post subject: |
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| Are you sure? Thanks a lot. |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2010-12-18 18:03:42 Post subject: |
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| Good imagination! |
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白水
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| Posted: 2010-12-19 08:18:24 Post subject: |
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| Thank you very much. |
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上城
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| Posted: 2010-12-25 07:16:42 Post subject: |
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Amazing! Really good!
So beautiful a shadow！
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白水
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| Posted: 2010-12-27 09:10:11 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢鼓励。问好节日 |
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戴玨
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| Posted: 2011-01-01 18:57:24 Post subject: |
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...the dark door
that a long night left me
it's just a shadow, not the true me
who is standing in the sunshine
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白水
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| Posted: 2011-01-02 09:35:28 Post subject: |
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thanks for you suggestion
Happy new year |
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