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PostPosted: 2008-03-02 20:19:12    Post subject: 情至无言最是疼 Reply with quote



情至无言最是疼

不说
什么都不说, 我
什么都不想说

不说
悴然而去的爹
不说孤独无助的娘, 不说
那只美丽的信鸽
折断的翅膀

是的, 不说!
沉默是我
无法躲避的目光, 凝于
一块石头. 一块
年青的
石头和一只苍老的手.


读诗友是有缘的诗歌及贴图,深感震动.
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PostPosted: 2008-03-02 20:49:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

如果是这样请不要悲哀

共和国的旗帜上有他们血染的风采


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PostPosted: 2008-03-02 21:19:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水的和作。
20年的痛,情感在那一刻决堤、爆发,真不知道要用什么样的语言才能表达。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 19:06:32    Post subject: Re: 如果是这样请不要悲哀 ... Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
如果是这样请不要悲哀
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谢谢金金
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 19:09:38    Post subject: Re: 谢谢白水的和作。 ... Reply with quote

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谢谢白水的和作。
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我只是依图而写, 刚才看了你的解释, 没想到还有故事. 20年后才见到儿子的墓,,,,,,,感慨........
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 19:10:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

情至无言最是疼
光题目就能抓人。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 19:39:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好,生铁来拜读。

现实的背景里,来读这首诗,那就是一种痛。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 20:00:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

厚重感人. 欢迎常来!(ZT)
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 21:33:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

是的, 不说!
沉默是我
无法躲避的目光, 凝于
一块石头. 一块
年青的
石头和一只苍老的手.

好题好诗,度着好感动!
问好!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-03 21:56:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

关注这样的诗歌 问好
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 16:04:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

我们不求诗歌能流传于世,唯愿写给最值得写给的人们,墓碑背后,是他们的默默无言和坚韧托起了祖国二字.仅凭这一点是许多当权者所不具备的.
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 16:48:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

疼,看片片痛,看诗更痛
痛了就想拒绝
拒绝又怎能淹没现实?

也许没有人会记住他们
但,他们的丰碑永在。

顶白水~~~
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 17:10:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

挺感动!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 16:50:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位朋友鼓励, 最近较忙, 那天读了有缘的诗歌, 挺感动. 忙完手头的事, 就把当时真实的情感记录下来了. 文字上未及斟酌. Embarassed

赵福治说的对," 我们不求诗歌能流传于世,唯愿写给最值得写给的人们,墓碑背后,是他们的默默无言和坚韧托起了祖国二字.仅凭这一点是许多当权者所不具备的."

很高兴有你们这样的诗友. 问好.
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PostPosted: 2008-03-07 18:54:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

老母亲在他的儿子牺牲在老山前线20年后第一次终于见到了自己唯一的儿子的坟墓!!!

为什么20年他没有来坟墓来看儿子?,答案就是他连去云南烈士陵园的车费都没有.
照片被发到网上后,那死去战士的其他一个还在生还的战友看到了,于是在千心万苦的努力下找到了烈士的家,想看看夕日战友的老母亲,没有想到,他站在那老母亲家门口惊呆了.她家里除了一口破锅一个土炕一碓棉花套子什么都没有,他儿子是家里唯一的劳动力,也在前线牺牲了,老伴当年就伤心的离开了人世.....
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PostPosted: 2008-03-07 19:03:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

无语
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PostPosted: 2008-03-07 19:23:53    Post subject: Re: 老母亲在他的儿子牺牲在老山前线20年后第一次... Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
老母亲在他的儿子牺牲在老山前线20年后第一次终于见到了自己唯一的儿子的坟墓!!!
老母亲在他的儿子牺牲在老山前线20年后第一次终于见到了自己唯一的儿子的坟墓!!!

为什么20年他没有来坟墓来看儿子?,答案就是他连去云南烈士陵园的车费都没有.
照片被发到网上后,那死去战士的其他一个还在生还的战友看到了,于是在千心万苦的努力下找到了烈士的家,想看看夕日战友的老母亲,没有想到,他站在那老母亲家门口惊呆了.她家里除了一口破锅一个土炕一碓棉花套子什么都没有,他儿子是家里唯一的劳动力,也在前线牺牲了,老伴当年就伤心的离开了人世.....老人当地民政每个月给的28元过日子今天28元能做什么,他儿子为国家做了什么,付出了什么,国家难道就用28元来打发这烈士的母亲吗?
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PostPosted: 2008-03-07 20:18:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

沉默是我
无法躲避的目光, 凝于
一块石头. 一块
年青的
石头和一只苍老的手.
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PostPosted: 2008-03-08 02:35:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏这种风格,自然、抒情。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-08 20:59:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个角度写更感人
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